Thanks very much for your thoughts and constructive criticism. They are greatly appreciated. As far as the problems you mentioned, I do read my material aloud. However, even though I do catch a lot of my mistakes, I still miss quite a few. One of my major problems is that I leave words out!!! I have to read and reread. Grammar and spelling are not my best subjects in school. My subjects are science and math. In fact, I teach high school chemistry and physics.
They are thieves. But as far as Mr. Jingles is concerned, you will just have to wait.

Lee