Little Dragon

Hey if you can post those other messages inside T-3 besides the dark side male Revan one.....thanks

If you've got the PC game, download Kotor Tool, and can see all those options in T3's dialogue tree.

When I'm not sure about character codes I narrow the search by using the Area to find the character files which link to their dialogue files.

For ex. for your skinner murders try following this path:

World map: AR0500 (bridge)
-> NPC's: Lieutenant Aegisfield
-> CRE file (INSPECT)
-> AI
-> Dialogue

Psh. Edwin has a halfling fetish. Can't get enough of them. xD

Meh, it's more like a female fetish.  Propositions Nalia, Mazzy, Viconia, that waitress in the docks ... at least a half-orc PC could throttle him if his attention wanders.  I think he even almost compliments Jaheira at some point.

Interesting.

It captured my attention right away, but sadly, it waned. I think it may have been the jumping around of the storyline. I would like to have seen more about what happened between the Dungeon and the Assylum.

Are you going to continue it? The story has magnificent potential, and you could really run with it.

Good work otherwise

The story was a bit rushed, and I agree that it could be fleshed out a lot more, but I don't think I'll be rewriting it soon, too many others things on the go right now. I was just replaying the game, and cursing again at Khalid's death, when the idea came to me.

Ooh, Khalid, I certainly didn't see that one coming... =)

Ah, good, you wern't supposed to.

This is an excellent idea, LittleDragon. . I must say I've always felt sorry for Khalid as well and wished I could bring him back to life again. However, I must agree with Jolyth that it jumps around a lot and is very disjointed. If you're trying to get across the confusion and shakiness, you're doing well but maybe you can still ease up on things and fill in the holes, I'm sure you'll still get those feelings across with less disjointedness.

If Heritage goes on long enough, I might rewrite this story to get Khalid into it. I was mainly interested in how plausible the idea of Khalid surviving Irenicus' dungeon was.

Yep, good plot/bad words is definitively a most efficient writer's bane... but don't you dare give up this most excellent story.

I won't give up, I'm much too stubborn.

As for paladins - well, I agree with that, but still. Alright, I can imagine a paladin of Ilmater being nice and tolerant and all, but somehow, I hardly imagine a paladin of Helm being tolerant of a traitor or a coward, as the nature of such a person would be against every teaching of his god. I guess there's a difference between different gods, or just in my imagination

In Faerun, at least, the gods do seem different, something that should be reflected by the various Paladin orders. Paladins of Ilmater are canon, something that surprised me when I was searching for a diety for Tiswash to follow.