Gothic Raven

*finally finds the comment thread* I have the strangest feeling that I've read this before. Deajavu?

Wuved the story. Go domi.

*Now feals sad* I now feel bad for all little gaurds I 'acidently' fried in the game. I'm so mean. :evil:

But I liked the little insight into those cute little gaurds who will soon be blood stains on my monitor. :evil:

Good job BobTokyo.

Wow... I go away for a couple days and look at all the comments. Not that I don't like the comments.

I however especially appreciate the criticism. I always prefer that over compliments, but I like those to.

@BobTokyo: MG sent me a pm asking me the same thing. So I put them in.

@farsal: When I wrote the first chapter in USED I had intended it to be a short stand alone story that would make you think. Thus the "...Have you ever been used?" line. But thanks to the encouragement of some really great people I kept writing. But I will most likely take it out now. Thank you for the advice on that subject. I was wrestling with taking it away or not.

@Pirengle: I thought about that, that's why I asked MG. But the main reason I'm posting here is because I'm a former member from before the merger. I'm just using another name.   So I wanted to contribute more to the site.

@Notmrt: No apology necessary . And yes I'm going to change the end.


Thank you all for reading and/or commenting. Their will be more!

I read a fan fic that said Revan cut his jaw off.

*imagines a wookie in a three piece suit* Hahahaha!