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Shadowhawke

Member Since 08 Feb 2004
Offline Last Active Apr 09 2013 12:24 AM

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Comments on "Homecoming", "Not in a Partying Mood", an

25 June 2012 - 11:37 PM

Hi Icedragon, I'd like to start off by saying welcome to Scribbles! :) It's good to see some new writing around here. :D

I'll admit, I've neither played Darian nor "A Dance with Rogues", but you managed to convey the feeling, background and characters in each quite smoothly. "It's About Time" felt a little jarring as a one-shot, however, simply because the emotional impact of it wasn't as self-contained as "Homecoming" and "Not in a Partying Mood". But I enjoyed all of them, and I'm looking forward to more if the writing bug bites again. :)

Comments on "Dancing Through Tears"

01 April 2012 - 06:06 PM

Just read all your updates in one shot. I liked what you focused on - the team again and how frustrated Zoe is by everything she's having to face. And all the stupidity on top of that. And, I have to say - love the title, and I can't wait to see how this Shepard changes her galaxy.