Kayli

Though I've always been a big fan of Edwin (along with Xan and his delightfully fatalistic manner), when my friend told me that someone had an Edwin romance mod in the works I have to admit I was a bit sceptical. After reading all that you have here, though, I really am impressed. I think you have a really good grasp of his personality, and you keep the elements of humor that are integral to his character.

As someone said earlier, girls /do/ like jerks, so long as they're done in a certain way. Anomen was a jerk, but he was too serious and whiney. Edwin is a jerk, but he's /funny/ and that makes all the difference.

I'm also fond of ego done in a humorous fashion - and I do think that an egotistical person can be selfless....he'll just be very impressed with his own selflessness and heroism afterwords. XD I'm currently working with my friend on a Haer'Dalis Romance mod (posted at the Chosen of Mystra forum), and ego plays a huge role in writing for him as well.

So yes, I think you're doing a wonderful job. Keep up the good work!