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Speed_Demon

Member Since 14 Feb 2006
Offline Last Active Jun 13 2006 06:31 PM

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In Topic: Comments on "Cinders and Rebirth"

11 May 2006 - 09:10 PM

Hey, tell you what, i'll invite you to laugh at my own writings once i get my current short piece finished, hmm? :P



I have no wish to laugh at your writings. While I feel that constructive criticism can be a valuable tool to any writer, perhaps words like "cheesy" would be more.....palatable....in a private message, rather than on a message board for all to see? Just a thought.

Good luck on your writing project.

In Topic: Comments on "Cinders and Rebirth"

10 May 2006 - 05:28 PM

And there she makes a wonderful observation, yes, you've managed to write the romance part rather nicely. :)
Mayhaps you've been reading too many Romance Novels?
:P
Just kidding.


Ack, just a wee little point that i, being the terrible critic that i am, will still make.
A few of the dialogue lines leave a hint of a cheesy taste to my mouth, like the characters would have been prepared for the surprises they encounter.
Or something, now it's out of my system. :P



Wow, what New York Times Best Seller have you written, Weer?

Just kidding. That makes it ok, right? :whistling:

Noctalys, I think your fic is very well written. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the rest of your story!

In Topic: Is there a current flirt pack for Eddie ready?

19 March 2006 - 06:29 PM

Any news on the flirt pack? Anything I can do to help?? I've got a lot of free time and virtually no life..... :P

Thanks for all of your work, Eddie is fabulous!

Patty

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