Maethor, fortunately, is scripted to only romance good-aligned npcs, so I don't have to worry about what evil-aligned player characters might think. She's a paladin, so all she would be doing in an evil-aligned party is front-line melee fighting... But I understand the point. I'll try to cut back on describing the player's emotions. My background as a writer actually makes this a little harder... :-)
I'm really sorry that you're having to repeat yourself. I'm not trying to be resistant. It takes me awhile to understand exactly what you're getting at. But I am slowly making the needed corrections. I'll move the triggers as you recommend.
"I can only advise to make a running install as soon as possible and debug your dialogues one after the other. Firstly it is really cool to see your own content in the game, and secondly you won't be faced with 50+ syntax errors on your first test install (I am talking out of experience).."
My first test install had dozens...literally dozens...of syntax and parsing errors. I've been doing running tests for a couple of weeks now to correct various problems.