Hey, good luck with your mod(I've checked that no NPCs of mine are present without my consent, so as long as it holds true, I'm okay with that; let me know if you ever need my cooperation), I just wanted to mention Angelo-Shar banter - would you please check the formatting/punctuation there, and maybe consult SisterVigilante for that one, if you haven't already? You've got a few commas missing after "Sheela" in a few lines.
Rest assured, I never proofread my own work. I have deemed it unprofessional. These were mostly banters that I wrote in the dead of the night after a few too many glasses of red wine, so admittedly a few mistakes are probable. Mostly I wanted to make sure that they went throught WEIDU, because I hated the thought of having worked on these and not being sure that the next Cross Banter Pack from G3 was ever going to get done. Thanks for bringing that to my attention, Kulyok.