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hook71

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In Topic: Jaheira Friendship (SoA & ToB)

25 December 2024 - 10:53 AM

Noticed a few small typos.

 

jahei25j.tra:
@21   = ~Let me just add one more thing: you have your companions around. People who want to help. Remember, your friends are not your enemies~
enemies~ -> enemies.~
@107  = ~Vengeance. It can be can be nurtured like an acorn from a fallen oak tree. But when new life sprouts from it, well... what will that sprouting sapling be like?~
It can be can be -> It can be
 
jaheiraj.tra:
@108  = ~Both the Harpers and my druidic brothers and sisters taught me about different paths one can take in life, but the older I become, the more my understanding changes. A path can be fickle, it is important to understand how it may twist, and to keep sight of its purpose. There are paths that may be disguised as helpful, but they stil lead those who walk them astray.~
stil -> still
@290  = ~...even though we are also quite different in so many ways. ~
ways. ~ -> ways.~