Zeevico
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In Topic: BTL - ToB Plan & Progress
22 July 2008 - 12:43 AM
Your mod (what I have played of it) is interesting so far. What I like is this:
- Kova is a competent mage/thief, and he's not Jan Jansen either. The fact that I am forced to lug him along past Spellhold is good, because otherwise I would never have a reason to do that (I would simply swap Jan for Imoen and be done with it). This way I will at least see what thieves can do late-game [twiddle their thumbs, I suppose
].
- Kiyone is a competent archer.
- Both have interesting personalities.
However, I do have one gripe. While it's a bit late to revise their dialogue, I admit that I find it unnecessarily long at times. There are also a few typos and grammatical errors. These can absolutely *kill* the immersion effect, no matter how good your writing might otherwise be. I suggest you ask someone to edit your work for these errors and/or point out where your sentences might need some work.
I would love to see Kiyone and Kova's little side-role in Baldur's Gate II continue into TOB. I must admit that so far they have injected some freshness into the game.
Thank you.
- Kova is a competent mage/thief, and he's not Jan Jansen either. The fact that I am forced to lug him along past Spellhold is good, because otherwise I would never have a reason to do that (I would simply swap Jan for Imoen and be done with it). This way I will at least see what thieves can do late-game [twiddle their thumbs, I suppose
].- Kiyone is a competent archer.
- Both have interesting personalities.
However, I do have one gripe. While it's a bit late to revise their dialogue, I admit that I find it unnecessarily long at times. There are also a few typos and grammatical errors. These can absolutely *kill* the immersion effect, no matter how good your writing might otherwise be. I suggest you ask someone to edit your work for these errors and/or point out where your sentences might need some work.
I would love to see Kiyone and Kova's little side-role in Baldur's Gate II continue into TOB. I must admit that so far they have injected some freshness into the game.
Thank you.
