Gutyiort

I'm trying to make my first full self made face, but as I looked at my finished beauty, I could only look at the worst things in it, first it wasn't that all of a difference from the HAPPE MAN of the vanilla version, secondly the jaw is almost a square, third I can't seem to make the cheeks work....
I'm tiring to make this plainly out of my mind, but I need some help and advice, I already readed two of the "guides" on this website, but still need some "personalized" help/advice... (on a side note, the yellow eyes were a test)

Edited: -Can someone tell me wow to make the faces clean, the links on the guide I readed were out, Tanks.