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#1 Shed

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Posted 28 July 2004 - 04:17 PM

(1) = Yikari. (2) = NPC

Yikari/Imoen

(2) Hey, Yikari, what's that under your chin... OW! Let go!

(1) Were you trying to play a practical joke on me, child?

(2) Yes! What's the matter with you! Let go of my hand!

(1) I am sorry. Please do not try that again.

(2) *sniff* <CHARNAME>, look what he did to my hand! //Move to Player1



I have written another banter with Imoen, but I don't want to reveal too much. This one shows the cold, not cruel side of Yikari.

Any comments? Suggestions? Abuse? Please let them known!

Edited by Shed, 29 July 2004 - 10:50 AM.


#2 Rathwellin the Bard

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Posted 29 July 2004 - 10:56 AM

You know failure only makes Imoen try harder. If she failed like this the first time then she would be sure to get him back later.

Also the last line of Immy seems a bit out of character.

Final note is that many of Imoen's 'jokes' tend to be cerebral not physical though she is certainly not above the latter.

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Posted 29 July 2004 - 11:00 AM

OK, thx. I'll write another banter or two when she has another go. For Immy's last line how about:

That was really horrid! <CHARNAME>, look what he did to my hand! //Move to Player1

#4 Rathwellin the Bard

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Posted 29 July 2004 - 11:25 AM

(2) ?Ow! Now it will probably take me a full day before I can cast anymore spells! You?re a grump Yikari!?

(2) ?Heh. I?m glad that CHARNAME doesn?t know how to do that though. And don?t you teach PROHIMHER either!?

#5 BobTokyo

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Posted 06 August 2004 - 03:45 PM

There's an Imoen banter for you.

"So Yikari, what do monks wear under their robes?"

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Posted 06 August 2004 - 03:53 PM

:lol: Thanks *writes it*.

Bob, have you seen my recent Immy banter ;)?

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Posted 06 August 2004 - 04:12 PM

Hehehe, no, newer than that. More :wub: : check PM.

And I couldn't conceive how to explain a deft dodging manoeuvre leaving Imoen in the Clasp of the Rabid Lobster could be explained in conversation.

Mabye an NPC should have said "Oh look, he's twisted her around. Now he's wrapping her left arm around her right thigh, and - ah yes. Now she's in the Clasp of the Rabid Lobster. If she tries to move, she'll break her collarbone, you know." ;)

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Posted 06 August 2004 - 04:19 PM

(2) Hey! Why are you holding me! Lemme go!"

(1) Were you trying to play a practical joke on me, child?

(2) Yes! What's the matter with you! Get your hand off my thigh!

(1) I am sorry. Please do not try that again.

(2) Say, you are strong aren't you. Warm too . . .

(1) What!? <CHARNAME>, control your sister! //Move to Player1

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Posted 06 August 2004 - 04:24 PM

^_^

As always, great service with a smile. Okay, so it's a grin from a rubber sack with orange fur, but a smile nonetheless ;) !


I might try that, though Y wouldn't touch her thigh. I know it is meant to be unintentional, but it makes it look sexual on his part.

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Posted 06 August 2004 - 04:31 PM

^_^

As always, great service with a smile. Okay, so it's a grin from a rubber sack with orange fur, but a smile nonetheless ;) !


I might try that, though Y wouldn't touch her thigh. I know it is meant to be unintentional, but it makes it look sexual on his part.

Fair enough. You know your character. :)

2) Hey! Why are you holding me! Lemme go!"

(1) Were you trying to play a practical joke on me, child?

(2) Yes! What's the matter with you! Get your hands off!

(1) I am sorry. Please do not try that again.

(2) Say, you are strong aren't you. Warm too . . .

(1) What!? <CHARNAME>, control your sister! //Move to Player1

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Posted 06 August 2004 - 05:05 PM

Moved from other discussion. I will modify Imoen's banter to make it more sexual, tying up with an overtly suggestive banter following (not posted).