Jump to content


Photo

Comments on "Anaria"


  • Please log in to reply
26 replies to this topic

#1 Beyshaliban

Beyshaliban

    With A Vengeance

  • Member
  • 738 posts

Posted 21 April 2004 - 09:57 AM

Instead of listening to my trainer in awe, I'm perusing Rusalka's fan fiction. *teehee*

You know, of course, that since you posted this now, I will pester you relentlessly until you finish it! :D

Bey

#2 thecursed

thecursed

    Just a ghost from the past

  • Member
  • 680 posts

Posted 22 April 2004 - 03:52 AM

nice touch with the prophecies. of course, we know better. in all its a good tale, but i've never been a fan of this kind of torturous romances
"Destiny, chance, fate, fortune.... they're all just ways of claiming your successes without claiming your failures"
Gerrard of the Weatherlight

Wisdom: Distinguish the extraordinary from the spectacular

Beware My ever shifting avatar!!

#3 Meira

Meira

    I'm the snow on your lips

  • Member
  • 411 posts

Posted 22 April 2004 - 04:08 AM

I'm glad that you have picked this story up again, Ruslaka. *waits anxiously for more*

-Meira
Ihmeellinen meri

Kummalliset kalat liukuvat syvyydessä,
tuntemattomat kukat loistavat rannalla;
olen nähnyt punaista ja keltaista ja kaikki toiset värit -
mutta ihana meri on vaarallista nähdä,
se herättää tulevien seikkailujen janon:
mitä on tapahtunut sadussa, on tapahtuva minullekin.

- Edith Södergran


Amber - The BG2 NPC Mod Project Now released!
Amber's discussion forum at Gibberlings 3

#4 Rusalka

Rusalka
  • Member
  • 34 posts

Posted 22 April 2004 - 06:14 AM

You know, of course, that since you posted this now, I will pester you relentlessly until you finish it!

I'm counting on it my friend. I shall endever not to disappoint. ;)

nice touch with the prophecies. of course, we know better. in all its a good tale, but i've never been a fan of this kind of torturous romances

Thank you, but I must warn you, the rest is all about torturous romance. My appologies to all the male readers. :P

I'm glad that you have picked this story up again, Ruslaka. *waits anxiously for more*

It's good to see people remember this story. With enough pestering I'll get going again. :)
A day wouldn't be complete without a Knight.

#5 thecursed

thecursed

    Just a ghost from the past

  • Member
  • 680 posts

Posted 22 April 2004 - 06:50 AM

Thank you, but I must warn you, the rest is all about torturous romance. My appologies to all the male readers. :P

don't worry about me, i'll survive the mush! ;)
"Destiny, chance, fate, fortune.... they're all just ways of claiming your successes without claiming your failures"
Gerrard of the Weatherlight

Wisdom: Distinguish the extraordinary from the spectacular

Beware My ever shifting avatar!!

#6 MorningGlory

MorningGlory
  • Member
  • 796 posts

Posted 22 April 2004 - 06:55 AM

You know, of course, that since you posted this now, I will pester you relentlessly until you finish it!

I'm counting on it my friend. I shall endever not to disappoint. ;)

nice touch with the prophecies. of course, we know better. in all its a good tale, but i've never been a fan of this kind of torturous romances

Thank you, but I must warn you, the rest is all about torturous romance. My appologies to all the male readers. :P

I'm glad that you have picked this story up again, Ruslaka. *waits anxiously for more*

It's good to see people remember this story. With enough pestering I'll get going again. :)



***MG walked gingerly to the closet where she kept her enchanted sharp, pointy stick. Retrieving it, she carefully dusted it and practiced jabbing into mid-air. It had only been a short time since she had used it, but she wanted to make sure she had not lost her 'touch'. 'Aha...', she thought to herself. 'As someone once said, resistance is futile.' ***

I suppose I don't have to finish this little vignette, do I, Ru?? :D :D Yes, pestering is allowed on this forum... Vast amounts of it, in fact. :D :D

We will anxiously await your updates, my friend. And if you are not as quick as we think you should be... well... there is always the sharp, pointy stick.. ;) ;)

:P :P

MG

#7 Rusalka

Rusalka
  • Member
  • 34 posts

Posted 22 April 2004 - 07:12 AM

***MG walked gingerly to the closet where she kept her enchanted sharp, pointy stick. Retrieving it, she carefully dusted it and practiced jabbing into mid-air. It had only been a short time since she had used it, but she wanted to make sure she had not lost her 'touch'. 'Aha...', she thought to herself. 'As someone once said, resistance is futile.' ***

***Rusalka lies comfortably drowsing in her bed. Suddenly a stange feeling comes over her, like she's being watched. She looks up but there is no one in the room. She lays her head down once more but remains unsettled. Suddenly she feels a sharp stab of pain and she leaps out of bed rubbing her left buttok. Still she sees nothing unusual that could have caused the pain. Shaken by her premonition she ruefully heads downstairs to turn on the computer....***

I think you've made you "point". :lol: :P ;)
A day wouldn't be complete without a Knight.

#8 MorningGlory

MorningGlory
  • Member
  • 796 posts

Posted 22 April 2004 - 07:18 AM

:P :P Good... :P :P

#9 thecursed

thecursed

    Just a ghost from the past

  • Member
  • 680 posts

Posted 23 April 2004 - 04:54 PM

you two have issues! :huh:
"Destiny, chance, fate, fortune.... they're all just ways of claiming your successes without claiming your failures"
Gerrard of the Weatherlight

Wisdom: Distinguish the extraordinary from the spectacular

Beware My ever shifting avatar!!

#10 Beyshaliban

Beyshaliban

    With A Vengeance

  • Member
  • 738 posts

Posted 24 April 2004 - 12:17 AM

you two have issues! :huh:

They're like that. Nothing to worry about. ;)

#11 Kaltia

Kaltia
  • Member
  • 1 posts

Posted 24 April 2004 - 02:10 PM

Oooh. I like it!

#12 Shadowhawke

Shadowhawke

    Starlight Seeker

  • Modder
  • 1568 posts

Posted 25 April 2004 - 03:01 AM

Nice... very nice. I like 'torturous' romance, as you guys have put it! Wow, keep going please!! :D

Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love

***

And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain


#13 Rusalka

Rusalka
  • Member
  • 34 posts

Posted 25 April 2004 - 06:47 AM

Thanks to everyone for their comments and encouragement. Here's another serving of angst for you. I can't remember if I've posted this chapter before or not, so remind me if I have. :rolleyes:
A day wouldn't be complete without a Knight.

#14 Shadowhawke

Shadowhawke

    Starlight Seeker

  • Modder
  • 1568 posts

Posted 26 April 2004 - 12:00 AM

So the plot grows deeper... and more twisted!! Oh god, I read it, and I was near out of my mind!! Wow, please keep going!! Poor Ano... :)

Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love

***

And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain


#15 Celestine

Celestine

    Elven Maiden

  • Modder
  • 4538 posts

Posted 26 April 2004 - 05:15 AM

Nice... very nice. I like 'torturous' romance, as you guys have put it! Wow, keep going please!! :D

haaa.. same here. Write more soon. ^_^

#16 thecursed

thecursed

    Just a ghost from the past

  • Member
  • 680 posts

Posted 26 April 2004 - 08:30 AM

So the plot grows deeper... and more twisted!! Oh god, I read it, and I was near out of my mind!! Wow, please keep going!! Poor Ano... :)

twisted is the word. had to read it twice to know what was going on. rereading it a third time today. (yes i can be kinda slow when it come to this kind of story)

and about ano, notice how in most stories kelsey always wins the girl?
"Destiny, chance, fate, fortune.... they're all just ways of claiming your successes without claiming your failures"
Gerrard of the Weatherlight

Wisdom: Distinguish the extraordinary from the spectacular

Beware My ever shifting avatar!!

#17 VigaHrolf

VigaHrolf

    God of Paperclips

  • Member
  • 79 posts

Posted 28 April 2004 - 10:20 AM

Ru,

I'm really enjoying the Tale of Anaria. I'm quite curious as to what is next. How will Ano react? Kelsey? What about Imoen and Jaheira?

And will hear more from Sarevok. I'm sure he'll have a few nice and kind and comforting things to say. ;)

VH

#18 Rusalka

Rusalka
  • Member
  • 34 posts

Posted 28 April 2004 - 11:20 AM

How will Ano react, Viga? I'm just wondering myself. Originally I had planned to dodge writing that bit, but now I think I have to. And with any luck I will work in some good banter with Imoen, Jahiera and Sarevok, as well as another NPC that will join the party.

@thecursed: It's too soon to write this one off as another 'Kelsey wins the girl' tale. ;)

@Shadowhawke and Celestine: Hang on there ladies, I'll try to get another part out soon.
A day wouldn't be complete without a Knight.

#19 farsal

farsal
  • Member
  • 113 posts

Posted 28 April 2004 - 05:32 PM

Really Rusalka you must write faster. It is very fun but when can we expect another installment?! I definitely want Anomen's reaction!!! :P :) :) :) :)

#20 -Skittles-

-Skittles-
  • Guest

Posted 28 April 2004 - 05:45 PM

Yo i dun read forums that much anymore, but shit u did a nice job wit this. make more so i dun have to get all pissed the the meen time!!!! :D :D :D ^_^ :lock: :lock: :lock: