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[MorningGlory]

She was for many years, mrt!

Hey... you're giving away my age.. no fair... And now I only write for my own pleasure and anyone else who wants to wade in and take a look.

[thecursed]

MG, you are the most calculated, cruel, and ruthless mastermind... even more than Aran! Us, the tortured fans, expect closure... but you leave us with a cliffhanger!!
More! More! Please!!

[Oh, and about the rest, absolute, brilliant work. }

i agree on both counts. now with this talent you can understand why i want you on the meetings crew....

[MorningGlory]

i know this iw as just actualy showing you i knew how to suck up hehe
good arnt i

hmmm... not half bad.... not half bad at all...

MG

[MorningGlory]

MG, you are the most calculated, cruel, and ruthless mastermind... even more than Aran! Us, the tortured fans, expect closure... but you leave us with a cliffhanger!! 
More! More! Please!!

[Oh, and about the rest, absolute, brilliant work.  }

i agree on both counts. now with this talent you can understand why i want you on the meetings crew....

Awww... TC.... I wish I had time to contribute, but other obligations keep chewing into my 'spare' time. *sigh* Maybe in the future?

But thank you for the wonderfully 'evil' compliments. It was just a little story, and I am very happy I was able to share it with you and others that enjoyed it.

MG

[thecursed]

can't blame me for trying tho!

[VigaHrolf]

MG,

As they say, better late than never. I don't know who they are, but that's what they say. And as such, I will loose my commentary.

First, Viga would like to wave and thank you for the cameo. He was quite pleased.

Seoncd, an excellent piece. The little adventure into the sewers. Dran as Aran, very nice. I had a feeling that there was some connetiong there as the training pace picked up. Some good dialogue.

The twist with the kidnapping was oh so delicious, but it did lack in your usual well honed edge. The pacing of the party doesn't seem to get up to the wham you need for the discovery. A little expansion there, some more with the party and its swirl, some crowd reaction to the preventative... that would probably help it I think.

But overall, an amazing piece of work. I'm glad to see it reach its full circle. And I can't wait for the next piece!

VH

[MorningGlory]

MG,

As they say, better late than never.  I don't know who they are, but that's what they say.  And as such, I will loose my commentary.

First, Viga would like to wave and thank you for the cameo.  He was quite pleased.

Seoncd, an excellent piece.  The little adventure into the sewers.  Dran as Aran, very nice.  I had a feeling that there was some connetiong there as the training pace picked up.  Some good dialogue.

The twist with the kidnapping was oh so delicious, but it did lack in your usual well honed edge.  The pacing of the party doesn't seem to get up to the wham you need for the discovery.  A little expansion there, some more with the party and its swirl, some crowd reaction to the preventative... that would probably help it I think. 

But overall, an amazing piece of work.  I'm glad to see it reach its full circle.   And I can't wait for the next piece!

VH

VH,

Think you're soooo smart, do you? Being a mind-reader and all.. Unfortunately the very last section was interrupted by some rl issues that needed attention first. However, the last chapter of MG is currently being reworked in the vein that I mentioned to Theo. An expansion of the party and subsequently a more detailed kidnapping. Plus a change in the perspective of the epilogue. Hopefully, I will be able to re-post those changes soon and also the first piece of Part III.

And welcome back, my dear friend. You were sorely missed but many of us understand that, er, 'tender trap'. Congratulations, and may your life together be blessed with all that is good and wonderful....

MG

er.. a little wedding gift for you from a few of us: :turnip: :turnip: :turnip:

[MorningGlory]

*prods MOGLO(trying out a new version of MG) to get back to work and slave over another hot story as he is hungry

I'm working... I'm working..... Patience... Patience... Soon.... Soon......

MG