Well, let's see your impressions on my first fic for BG1, and how badly I did.
Comments on 'Hollowed Ice'
Started by Lady LeFay, Mar 13 2004 11:55 PM
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Lady LeFay
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Posted 13 March 2004 - 11:55 PM
"This Rod will be your doom!" -- Kilik.
"Do you know how much that turns me on, Ki?"
"Maxi! I'm trying to be serious here!" -- Maxi and Kilik
When angry, count to four; when very angry, swear. -- Mark Twain
To disagree with three-fourths of the British public is one of the first requisites of sanity.
Oscar Wilde
And alien tears will fill for him Pity's long-broken urn, For his mourners will be outcast men, And outcasts always mourn.
Dante Romancable Mod: 'Tis a courtly love of a different sort
"Do you know how much that turns me on, Ki?"
"Maxi! I'm trying to be serious here!" -- Maxi and Kilik
When angry, count to four; when very angry, swear. -- Mark Twain
To disagree with three-fourths of the British public is one of the first requisites of sanity.
Oscar Wilde
And alien tears will fill for him Pity's long-broken urn, For his mourners will be outcast men, And outcasts always mourn.
Dante Romancable Mod: 'Tis a courtly love of a different sort
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Posted 14 March 2004 - 05:59 AM
Hi Lady Lefay, it is a nice vignette, and I am glad that our little poll inspired you thinking more about BG1 NPCs 
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Lady LeFay
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Posted 14 March 2004 - 07:51 AM
Thanks, I wasn't sure if it would turn out too shallow or too cliche, but I think it looks good for now.
"This Rod will be your doom!" -- Kilik.
"Do you know how much that turns me on, Ki?"
"Maxi! I'm trying to be serious here!" -- Maxi and Kilik
When angry, count to four; when very angry, swear. -- Mark Twain
To disagree with three-fourths of the British public is one of the first requisites of sanity.
Oscar Wilde
And alien tears will fill for him Pity's long-broken urn, For his mourners will be outcast men, And outcasts always mourn.
Dante Romancable Mod: 'Tis a courtly love of a different sort
"Do you know how much that turns me on, Ki?"
"Maxi! I'm trying to be serious here!" -- Maxi and Kilik
When angry, count to four; when very angry, swear. -- Mark Twain
To disagree with three-fourths of the British public is one of the first requisites of sanity.
Oscar Wilde
And alien tears will fill for him Pity's long-broken urn, For his mourners will be outcast men, And outcasts always mourn.
Dante Romancable Mod: 'Tis a courtly love of a different sort
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Trinin
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Posted 14 March 2004 - 07:58 PM
It was very nice LL. It was slightly cliche but still very good. And we might get into a disagrement over who's more perverted.
My mother asked me why I always wear black. I told her because it's the color of my soul~Trinin
Some say good always wins others say evil does. But the truth is I always win~Trinin
Some say fighting is wrong, I say you only say that because you all ways lost.~Trinin
Some say good always wins others say evil does. But the truth is I always win~Trinin
Some say fighting is wrong, I say you only say that because you all ways lost.~Trinin
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Posted 15 March 2004 - 09:29 PM
L.L here, too lazy to log in, yea, I edited it a bit earlier, and need to do one more teensy spelling correction but this is the final verison...
now... ONTO DANTE!
now... ONTO DANTE!
