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[Darlatan]

Working a little bit of Tashia modification, and looking over Bri's dialogs, and the part between Tashia and Belmin is a little lacking on Belmin's part. So I put in this part.

Belmin starts (seeing Tashia in the party):
You! Another foul elf! You dare walk about this city!

Tashia:
Oh? What have I done to you to make you so hateful?

Belmin:
You are evil, all of you! If not for you and your foul kin my son would still be alive!

Tashia:
And how exactly is this my fault?

Belmin:
My son was out hunting when he stumbled upon you elves. Instead of reasoning with him, he was shot full of elven arrows!

Tashia:
You know, just by listening to you spew forth your hate, it's no wonder your son was killed by elves, especially if he took after you.

Tashia:
It never ceases to amaze me the depths people will sink to indulge their hate. Let me give you something to think on, SIR. Maybe, just maybe, the fact that your son died was because of you. Oh, let's hypothesize, he was somewhere he shouldn't have been, or if he was captured and ordered to surrender, and he didn't because he didn't believe he stood a chance of living anyways. Well, that would make the fault yours...

Belmin:
Foul elven witch! You have no RIGHT!

Tashia:
Ugh, come on <CHARNAME>, let's go. Just being near this fool is making my skin crawl, I'm going to really need a hot bath after this.


Any comments?

[Bane]

Belmin:
You are evil, all of you! If not for you and your foul kin my son would still be alive!

Did he start hating elves after his son was killed or was he already rascist?

If he wasn't a rascist then his son may have been killed for no reason instead of taking after his father

[Darlatan]

Belmin:
You are evil, all of you! If not for you and your foul kin my son would still be alive!

Did he start hating elves after his son was killed or was he already rascist?

If he wasn't a rascist then his son may have been killed for no reason instead of taking after his father

It doesn't really say. All it says is that both his daughter and son were killed by elves, and you only get that when the main character is an elf.

A good point, and one I thought about when filling in Belmin's lines. I figured this was the best availiable to feed Belmin lines to parallel Tashia's..

[Bane]

It doesn't really say. All it says is that both his daughter and son were killed by elves, and you only get that when the main character is an elf.

A good point, and one I thought about when filling in Belmin's lines. I figured this was the best availiable to feed Belmin lines to parallel Tashia's..

I stopped talking to him ever since he becamse an enemy when Viconia was in my party, I thought he was some random rascist.

Cool otherwise

[Bri]

Nice job Darlatan. I don't mind fleshing things out. If you notice when I was doing the interjections and such, it all came out at about the same time, so some will definitely be better than others.