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[hook71]

Noticed only a few.

 

dornj.tra:

@15   = ~Is that what you truly want? Your weak and pathetic ideals of family will have little meaning once you are dead.  You should instead strive to accumulate as much power as you can while you are still living so that whatever heir you choose to leave behind can continue your legacy destruction.~

dead.  You -> dead. You

legacy destruction -> legacy of destruction

@47   = ~How did it feel when you killed your brother? Could you feel his blood's warmth on your hands? Did it made your heart beat stronger? Tell me.~

made -> make

@195  = ~The recent events: they made me an even better champion. And my patron's power... hah! I will gladly use it to slay those on our way!~

those on our -> those in our

@233  = ~More important things? Very few things feel less important than power and dominance. These are what life is about.~

less -> more

 

dorn25j.tra:

@9    = ~I must admit that his doings made me learn. I would have never become who I am now if it wasn't for egotic plan.~

for egotic -> for his egotic

@29   = ~No matter how empty the road is, you always encounter someone wishing you dead. What makes me wonder if you'll die young, Bhaalspawn.~

What -> That

[Lava Del'Vortel]

Thank you! I will implement those when I have a moment

Also thank you for all those years of reports!

[Lava Del'Vortel]

The new version is up! Thanks again!