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[hook71]

Looked through the tra-files and found a few typos.

mazzy25j.tra:

@32 = ~Are you so sure, <CHARNAME>? Could we have not stayed, defended the city? Perhaps we...~

have not stayed -> not have stayed

mazzyj.tra:

@84 = ~If there had have been, I would have taken it.~

had have been -> had been

@154 = ~You will have your revenge, <CHARNAME>, but our priority is rescuing Imoen. Let us make haste; the sooner we can rescue her from Irenicus's clutches, the sooner we can exact justice upon him and that foul witch, Bodhi.~

Irenicus's -> Irenicus'

@184 = ~If you had have said that a few months ago, I would have agreed with you. Now...~

had have said -> had said

@239 = ~It felt right. It is difficult to explain. My father was a devotee of Arvoreen, too, before he died, and though I pay my respects to the other Gods, Arvoreen has always held a place in my hear. He has never guided me wrong.~

hear -> heart

[Kaeloree]

Thanks for going through all these mods, it's great to have someone giving them another once-over!

In this case, I'm going to disagree with you on a few of them; "have not stayed" and "had have been" were deliberately phrased that way. The others are, of course, absolutely correct Thanks!

[hook71]

No problem! Thought I would check a few mods I will be using in a future playthrough. And your call on the grammar of course! Note that @32 and @33 disagree a bit about the "have not stayed"/"not have stayed" phrasing.

@32 = ~Are you so sure, <CHARNAME>? Could we have not stayed, defended the city? Perhaps we...~
@33 = ~Maybe not, but could we not have stayed, defended the city? Perhaps we...~

[Kaeloree]

They should both be "have not stayed," actually, thanks for pointing that out

I know it looks strange written, but spoken out loud it sounds much more like something Mazzy would say.

[Miloch]

"If there had have been" just sounds unwieldy though. Does she really talk like that? I'd rather see "If there had been one" - assuming she's talking about having a choice (hard to tell without seeing the full dialogue).

Incidentally, @85 ("What do you have against thieves") is missing a ? at the end of it.

[hook71]

The typos in this thread are still present in version 2.1.

[Kaeloree]

Silently updated, thanks!