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#1 Darkcyeote

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Posted 15 August 2011 - 09:38 PM

Perhaps it is hard to take a new person seriously.
But, no matter the situation I find myself in. I always show people where I stand.
I love BG II. I love PS Torment. And after playing both for so long, (since the 90's) I started to write a script for a mod that is now finished.

In reality, there is a good chance that nothing will come out of this.
But hell, if duke nukem could come out after so long. Who knows?

To that end, here is my proposal; I could use a few people to read a few of my scripts.
They will be mostly BG II party interjections. I want to know if what I have written seems "in character"

But here is a bit of what/who Al'bah is. Revealed by a disciple of Oghma, speaking to (CHARNAME)

"the loss of your foster father caused a great deal of strain on your soul if not outright damage.
Then came the loss of your fallen comrades, torture, and most recently the loss of your only family; Imoen.
All this pain, and suffering threatened to destroy your soul.
Your divine heritage responded to all this damage in the only way it knew how to repair a soul so damaged, by creating a new life-force....within you."


"(CHARNAME) it is not an easy thing to damage a soul considering they were made to last forever.
And it is almost impossible to effect the repair of one so damaged.
Your divine essence created this life-force because you believed, consciously or not, that is what it would take to ensure your survival, and it's own."

The entire script for BG II and TOB is finished. And now I set to the task to learn how to (gulp!) code it.
I do not ask for anyone else to do so for me.
Just a few people to read what I have written, and to share their thoughts.
thank you.

#2 -JR-

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Posted 15 August 2011 - 09:49 PM

A more than reasonable request. If there's no pressing timeline on the feedback, I'm up for it.

"Education without values, as useful as it is, seems rather to make man a more clever devil." - C.S. Lewis


#3 Darkcyeote

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Posted 16 August 2011 - 03:15 PM

A more than reasonable request. If there's no pressing timeline on the feedback, I'm up for it.

No presseing timeline.
A message has been sent to you already.
Thank you