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#1 Orm

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Posted 08 September 2009 - 06:59 PM

I have started writing a story, no a book, or maybe three books based on BG, SoA, and ToB.  I'm writing it in first person.  However, after I have wandered about this forum, I have decided to work first on some short stories and get some feedback.  I will also read every story posted in the fanfiction library of completed works, and maybe, provide some feedback of my own (I hope I don't get anyone mad).  Even though I have written some short stories in the past, I'm still very much a novice at writing.  I will need every bit of advice I can get! (I'm a high school chemistry and physics teacher by trade)
Shadowhawke, Pirengle, and Jolyth, I appreciate all the knowledge you placed in the topics at the beginning  of the forum, I will return to them often.  All I can say now is that I have been bitten by the writing, or in my case, the story-telling bug again!

Orm (aka Lee)
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#2 TC Dale

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Posted 08 September 2009 - 11:06 PM

Wow. You're going to read EVERY story posted in the fanfiction library? That's going to take a while :) There's a lot! But if you do, I'm sure all the authors would love feedback. It's one thing authors can't get enough of.

Feel free to post your stories, long or short. There's a pretty good audience here on the boards, and fresh new stories are always welcome!

#3 Shadowhawke

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Posted 09 September 2009 - 01:51 AM

Seconded. :) Welcome to Scribbles, Orm! It will be great to have you both as a reader and as a writer.

and maybe, provide some feedback of my own (I hope I don't get anyone mad)


I agree with TC Dale, Orm. :) Most authors will love you for giving them feedback - like yourself, many have posted on this board to learn and improve themselves as well as because they enjoy the world they write in. I suggest looking at Pirengle's Guide to fanfic and scrolling down a bit - there's a guide on how to give constructive criticism if you're worried about it. Also note the structure of the forum - many stories already have their own 'Comments' threads, and it's usually a good idea to post in them if you want to give feedback.

Above all, don't be afraid. :) Many of us have started off as novice writers here. Heck, labels such as 'novice' are bendable anyway. You are a writer and a reader, and so don't be afraid to post, critique, and write your heart out here. :D

I look forwards to seeing you around.

-Shadowhawke

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