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[Aeryn]

The only thing is, regarding the .d, you have to make up your own unique tag for each dialog instead of "sa1ar." I used that for Aerie's talk, but each has to be unique from all others or there will be conflicts (at least, that's how it was explained to me). In my head, I usually do something like this: Sarevok=sa, first talk=1, second talk=2, Aerie=ar, Haer'dalis=hd, Keldorn=ke, etc, etc, and then I make a cute little combo like sa1ar, sa1ke, sa1hd or whatever and use the .1, .2 as the subsequent branches. Yes, I'm insane (I did mention OCD, right ), but it works for me and keeps me from repeating them. So, in essence, each unique dialog has to have it's own unique label.

By the way, and I hesitate to say this because I know how it's going to sound, but since the Sarevok Relationship mod seems pretty dead, you might want to check out those threads and scavenge some ideas if you haven't already. A lot of suggestions were made and it might make it easier to come up with flirts, and maybe even love talks, if you can see what people were expecting on a larger scale than here. In fact, if I remember correctly, Rastor was asking if anyone might be serious about taking that project over because he had copies of all the work already done on it. I hate the idea of necro-ing someone else's work, but I thought I'd throw it out there anyway.

[berelinde]

Anyways, I put it in code, I think. I hope I did it right... Probably not... But oh well... Let's see what the general masses think eh?

IF ~~ sa1ar
SAY~(You see Sarevok Anchev, the man who has tried to kill you in the past and set you on the path you now walk standing not far away. You)~
++~Flirt~sa1ar.1
++~Turn Away~
END

Hey! Lookee! Code!

Actually, it isn't bad at all. You need to make sure there's some kind of transition after your PC replies, like a GOTO or a EXIT, and putting in spaces on the code side of tildes isn't a bad idea, but it's generally looking really, really good!

If you want that first state, sa1ar, to be a PID, you need to have some kind of condition in it, like ~IsGabber(Player1)~, but you'll pick that up as you go.

[EpitomyofShyness]

By the way, and I hesitate to say this because I know how it's going to sound, but since the Sarevok Relationship mod seems pretty dead, you might want to check out those threads and scavenge some ideas if you haven't already. A lot of suggestions were made and it might make it easier to come up with flirts, and maybe even love talks, if you can see what people were expecting on a larger scale than here. In fact, if I remember correctly, Rastor was asking if anyone might be serious about taking that project over because he had copies of all the work already done on it. I hate the idea of necro-ing someone else's work, but I thought I'd throw it out there anyway.

I actually did go over there. I sat around that forum for months hoping it would come back to life. Sadly I think it is totally dead. I hope I'm wrong, seeing as how I would really rather play a Sarevok Relationship/Romance rather than make it, but if I have to make it to play it so be it.

I didn't post all the flirt ideas. Just a few. I have a long list of them on my computer.

As for Rastor I tried contacting him but it didn't work. Oh well. I would feel guilty doing much more than stealing flirt ideas. And there isn't a ton of info on that forum anyways sadly, I combed it a lot. Oh well.

Actually, it isn't bad at all. You need to make sure there's some kind of transition after your PC replies, like a GOTO or a EXIT, and putting in spaces on the code side of tildes isn't a bad idea, but it's generally looking really, really good!

If you want that first state, sa1ar, to be a PID, you need to have some kind of condition in it, like ~IsGabber(Player1)~, but you'll pick that up as you go.

Went waaaaaaaaaaay over my head. I'm a copycat unfortunately... I managed that by looking over Aeryn's Sarevok vs NPC diaolgs. If someone were willing to help me learn better I would be eternally grateful, but my computer is strange and hates Weidu. It let's me install stuff using Weidu but maybe I'm just computer retarded because it wouldn't let me look at any of the examples in the Weidu folder. It said 'The program required to open this file is not installed on this computer' or something of the sort.

Anyways was I in character? What did people think on that account? Originally I had an opportunity to mention the tattoos in this but with Aeryn's request my brain went into idea mode so I deleted it so that the 'Trace Sarevok's Tattoos' could get it's very own conversation.

[Neferit]

Yes, copying code can help you to learn. I tried to learn how to work with DLTCEP first long time ago (when I was trying to make my own NPC - I still write diologs for him - just for fun, since my code-learning never went anywhere). Hm, reminds me I should install it again, since the program is really useful.

Good ideas everyone. Aeryn, I simply love your writing style. HD was deeply in character. I can easily imagine him doing that Epithomy - nice flirt - staring at Saverok will be fun Rodeo - ehm.... as much as I dislike having nightmares, this may be quite fun to have them, when you have Saverok around

[Aeryn]

Seems in character to me, and the description of him in the beginning is great. Maybe change the word "tall" (because it's boring compared to the rest of the wording) to like "towering" or "imposing." I'm a thesaurus addict.

This is so random, and a sure sign that I should be in bed by now, but I can't stop thinking of either a flirt of a love talk that has something to do with comparing scars. He has some pretty noticeable ones on his face, so I imagine he has many in other places as well... And after the lovely Irenicus got his claws in CHARNAME, she's sure to have her share as well. My mind of course descends straight into the gutter with this idea, but it could lead to a deeper conversation or something, especially if the PC is good/neutral and leading Sarevok toward CG. I might have to write the idea out and see what you think...because it will not leave my head.

[EpitomyofShyness]

Ooh! Please do! I am going to say here and now though... I willbe unable to write any sort of dialog which goes down the gutter, not because I wouldn't want to, but because even thinking about it has my cheeks all flushed and me wanting to get up and run in circles squeeing...

In other words I wouldn't be able to concentrate long enough.

Anyways, comparing scars. You just gave me an idea Aeryn! I mentioned somewhere, I don't think it was here, probably in an email to HighTimeRodeo, that since ToB is so short that one conversation might need to lead into another, or just not happen at all. Here's my idea.

So say <CHARNAME> has showed an interest in Sarevok, somehow or other they get a little... under dressed, Sarevok is mostly unaware of what <CHARNAME> has been doing in her travels, he could comment on one scar or another, from here it could go several directions.

a) doooooooown the gutter
b) PC freaking a little. After all, some girls would be pretty darn self concious about scars.
c) comparing scars. The more battle hardened warrior types. How'd you get that one? Oh this was from back in Nashkel, etc.

From b or c it could proceed into an Irenicus talk instead of the nightmare. Just a thought. Anyways I've been blabbering and it's almost one in the morning... I need someone to come and knock me out... Preferably someone who 'towers' over my 5' 1'' and is wonderfully dark skinned with tattoos and... Minus the whole having a phsyco god for a father and having your foster father die on you, not to mention being tortured by an insane mage and having many of your friends die... being the PC would be sooooooo awesome....

[Orthodoxia]

I'd love to have an option to compare scars with Sarevok, especially seeing how my PC would win hands down since her body is covered neck down in all kinds of scars, from small ones to big really nasty ones Yes, I love to torture my creations Please give the option for the PC to have more "impressive" scars then him

As for when, it could happen after battle or at rest when they are dressing wounds, the PC could have taken off her shirt to change or put bandages. Perfect time for the mind to slid into gutter

P.S. I refuse to let my mind slide into gutter. I say refuse but it's already drowning in it

Edited by Orthodoxia, 13 January 2009 - 01:46 AM.

[berelinde]

I'm no Sarevok expert, so I haven't got a lot to offer in terms of whether it sounds like Sarevok, but I can offer at least a little guidance in terms of finding code examples to copy.

Eventually, you're going to have to learn to work the command prompt (DOS, where WeiDU operates), but there are tutorials on that. When I've had some coffee and can see straight, I'll see if I can find one for you.

But for now, I'll say that you have any number of examples of code sitting right in front of you every time you open a mod folder. Inside each mod folder, you'll probably find sub-folders with dialogues, scripts, creatures, etc. You can open these with any text editor. This link gives a list of resources you might need, including links to free text editors that aren't Notepad, which, quite frankly, sucks. I'd recommend Crimson Editor as a text editor. It's free, and it's got highlighters that will help you spot coding mistakes. Unfortunately, the link for the highlighters points to the G3 wiki, which seems to be experiencing difficulties. I'll poke cmorgan, who wrote them, and see if I can get him to send me the files so I can put them up for download on my own site.

Anyway, once you've got open mod files in front of you, you will have examples for doing just about anything you want. Go easy, at first, or your head may explode. If it were me, I'd start by looking at unscripted banter. And I would definitely stick to newer mods! For unscripted banter, you might want to try looking at Haldamir, a very simple NPC. Romantic Encounters is a veritable mine of code. It offers scripted dialogue (check out the NPC reactions), cutscenes, and examples of copying and modifying creatures on the fly (which is helpful if you don't want to have to come up with a new creature for every single one you spawn).

[EpitomyofShyness]

That Crimson Editor might help, but I've tried opening mod files, my computer won't let me. And I'd probably look at RE since I have it installed already.

Thank you very much for offering to find me that tutorial. I still don't think I'll be able to do the final coding no matter how much I learn, but anything I can do to make that person's job easier is a step in the right direction.

[Lykainon]

That Crimson Editor might help, but I've tried opening mod files, my computer won't let me.

Really? What's the problem? Have you tried "Open with..." and then selected Notebook/Crimson Editor/ConTEXT or something like that? Unless I'm horribly mistaken that should do it for most mod files, at the very least the .d's and such.

EDIT: Just thought of something, you know you're supposed to open the uncompiled files (.d etc. in the mod's own folder) and not the installed ones (.dlg etc. in the override folder?

Edited by Lykainon, 13 January 2009 - 11:19 AM.

[Aeryn]

Tiny portion of the scar talk I'm working on. Pre-romance, building tension more than anything. I still haven't a clue how it should start, so yeah, still in rough draft stages, and I'd just like to know if it's what people had in mind and so on.

PC: ~Where did you get that scar?~

IF ~~ sa1scar
SAY ~Which one?~
++ ~That one on your cheek.~ + sa1scar.1
++ ~There, on your shoulder.~ + sa1scar.2
++ ~That especially nasty one on your back. Gods, how is it that you still have skin after all the punishment your back has taken?~ + sa1scar.3
++ ~That one there by your navel. It looks as though it travels toward a rather intimate region?~ + sa1scar.4
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.1
SAY ~A drunken knife fight. A half-dozen arrogant fools thought me an easy target. They were wrong.~
++ ~You sound proud of yourself.~ + sa1scar.11
++ ~So you killed or beat the hells out of men likely half your size? Congratulations.~ + sa1scar.11
++ ~Ah, the wonders of alcohol.~ + sa1scar.12
++ ~Sounds like fun.~ + sa1scar.12
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.11
SAY ~I was merely stating the facts.~
IF ~ + sa1scar.13
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.12
SAY ~The things we do to pass the time.~
IF ~ + sa1scar.13
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.13
SAY ~What of you, dear sister? Had any fights that left their mark?~
++ ~Oh, I?ve seen my share of bar brawls. This particular fight had nothing to do with me, but I still took a dagger to the ribs. (Lift the edge of your shirt to show the faded puncture wound on your side.)~ + sa1scar.14
++ ~I have my share of scars from bar brawls and otherwise. Seems inevitable for people like us.~ + sa1scar.5
++ ~I don?t scar.~ + sa1scar.none
++ ~Enough idle chatter. We should get some rest.~ + sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.14
SAY ~(Sarevok leans in close to see the scar, near enough to feel the heat of his body. After a moment, he raises his hand to touch the mar on your skin.)
++ ~(Stay still and let him touch you.)~ + sa1scar.16
++ ~Looking for an excuse to touch me?~ + sa1scar.15
++ ~(Jerk away before his hand gets near.)~ + sa1scar.amused
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.15
SAY ~Only as much as you were looking for an excuse to show me your body.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.16
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.16
SAY ~(His fingers are rough and callused against your sensitive skin, but his touch is gentle as his intense eyes hold your gaze.) Careful. A sister should not look at her brother like that.~
++ ~And a brother should not touch his sister like that.~ + sa1scar.17
++ ~Like what?~ + sa1scar.18
++ ~(Lean closer to him, your faces only inches apart.)~ + sa1scar.19
++ ~(Pull away from him and hastily rearrange your clothes.)~ + sa1scar.amused
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.17
SAY ~You don?t seem to mind.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.19
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.18
SAY ~Don?t play coy.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.19
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.19
SAY ~(There is a sense of uncertainty in his eyes, but he seems to realize something and pulls away from you.) Do not play games with me, <CHARNAME>. (With that warning, he stalks away.)~
IF ~~ EXIT
END

[Neferit]

I have to say that I'm pretty curious about the "sa1scar.amused" part

[Orthodoxia]

I have to say I'd like to read the whole thing, provided you've written it that is I want to know what happens after "sa1scar.5"

Edited by Orthodoxia, 13 January 2009 - 01:26 PM.

[EpitomyofShyness]

........... Ug! There is a reason I wish someone other than me would make this, especially you Aeryn! Your just so darn good!

As for a question from earlier, I installed Weidu and tried to look at the examples of dialog and stuff that they provide and that wouldn't open. And I don't touch the override folder if I can avoid it, so no I wasn't trying to open stuff in that.

[Icendoan]

It really is just a text file, you can open .D files in whatever editor you like.

Icen

[Aeryn]

Okay, here's the completed talk. It's still rough and needs work and double/triple checking and whatnot. And of course a starting point. It wasn't easy to sequence this one, so sorry if it's hard to follow the flow of each branch.

PC: ~Where did you get that scar?~

IF ~~ sa1scar
SAY ~Which one?~
++ ~That one on your cheek.~ + sa1scar.1
++ ~There, on your shoulder.~ + sa1scar.2
++ ~That especially nasty one on your back. Gods, how is it that you still have skin after all the punishment your back has taken?~ + sa1scar.3
++ ~That one there by your navel. It looks as though it travels toward a rather intimate region?~ + sa1scar.4
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.1
SAY ~A drunken knife fight. A half-dozen arrogant fools thought me an easy target. They were wrong.~
++ ~You sound proud of yourself.~ + sa1scar.11
++ ~So you killed or beat the hells out of men likely half your size? Congratulations.~ + sa1scar.11
++ ~Ah, the wonders of alcohol.~ + sa1scar.12
++ ~Sounds like fun.~ + sa1scar.12
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.11
SAY ~I was merely stating the facts.~
IF ~ + sa1scar.13
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.12
SAY ~The things we do to pass the time.~
IF ~ + sa1scar.13
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.13
SAY ~What of you, dear sister? Had any and fights that left their mark?~
++ ~Oh, I?ve seen my share of bar brawls. This particular fight had nothing to do with me, but I still took a dagger to the ribs. (You lift the edge of your shirt to show the faded puncture wound on your side.)~ + sa1scar.show
++ ~I have my share of scars from bar brawls and otherwise. Seems inevitable for people like us.~ + sa1scar.alike
++ ~I don?t scar.~ + sa1scar.none
++ ~Enough idle chatter. We should get some rest.~ + sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.2
SAY ~One would think you?d learned to recognize your own handiwork by now.~
++ ~Oh?for what it?s worth, I?m sorry.~ + sa1scar.21
++ ~I did recognize it.~ + sa1scar.22
++ ~Sarevok, I?ve put my mark on so many people that their faces all run together in my mind. You?re no more important than any other.~ + sa1scar.22
++ ~Forget I asked.~ + sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.21
SAY ~Save your pity for another.~
++ ~It?s not pity. I really am sorry.~ + sa1scar.23
++ ~Very well.~ + sa1scar.23
++ ~Sensitive subject, eh?~ + sa1scar.23
++ ~Forget I said anything.~ sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.22
SAY ~Bragging?~
++ ~Yep.~ + sa1scar.23
++ ~Well?maybe just a little.~ + sa1scar.23
++ ~Not at all.~ + sa1scar.23
++ ~You know what, forget I said anything.~ + sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.23
SAY ~Is there a reason you came over here to annoy me?~
++ ~Look, if it makes you feel better, you left your share of marks on me as well. Like this one. (You ease one side of your pants off your hip to reveal a long, aging scar.)~ + sa1scar.show
++ ~Perhaps it doesn?t help to hear, but you left your share of marks on me as well.~ + sa1scar.alike
++ ~If I could scar, you would have left plenty on me.~ + sa1scar.none
++ ~You?re such an ass. Forget I said anything.~ + sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.3
SAY ~My foster father was not as kind as yours, dear sister. While your beloved Gorion would likely make you sit in the corner, Rieltar would have me chained and whipped for my mistakes.~
++ ~Gods?I?m sorry, Sarevok.~ + sa1scar.31
++ ~Gorion was no pushover, but I cannot imagine?it explains much about you, though.~ + sa1scar.32
++ ~Well, he?s dead now, so it doesn?t matter much anymore.~ + sa1scar.33
++ ~Hah, I?m pretty sure Gorion would say he should have taken a firmer hand with me.~ + sa1scar.34

IF ~~ sa1scar.31
SAY ~I don?t need your pity.~
++ ~It?s not pity. It?s sympathy.~ + sa1scar.34
++ ~Very well.~ + sa1scar.34
++ ~I didn?t mean to upset you.~ + sa1scar.34
++ ~Why do I bother? Forget I said anything.~ + sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.32
SAY ~Does it? No, say no more. I have no desire to hear your theories.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.34
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.33
SAY ~I?perhaps you?re right.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.34
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.34
SAY ~Did you come over here just to compare our childhood years, then?~
++ ~My foster father may not have been a monster, but I have seen my share of torture. (You loosen the collar of your shirt and bare part of your chest, revealing only a portion of the myriad of scars you received at the hands of a certain blue-eyed mage.)~ + sa1scar.show
++ ~Although Gorion was a good man, my life has not been easy. I have seen my share of torture, and my body bears the scars just as yours does.~ + sa1scar.alike
++ ~I have seen my share - and more - of torture, though my body bears no scars, no matter how grave the wound.~ + sa1scar.none
++ ~Nevermind. Forget I said anything.~ + sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.4
SAY ~Nosey wench. If you must know, an angry whore was adamant I?d shorted her on coin.~
++ ~A?whore?!~ + sa1scar.41
++ ~Sounds like you got what was coming to you.~ + sa1scar.44
++ ~Did you short her?~ + sa1scar.45
++ ~Hah! Sounds like a girl I?d get along with.~ + sa1scar.46
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.41
SAY ~Does that offend your delicate sensibilities, my dear sister?~
++ ~Of course it does! That?s disgusting!~ + sa1scar.42
++ ~A little?you never know where those women have been.~ + sa1scar.42
++ ~No, I?m just shocked that a woman who sells herself was able to outmaneuver you with a weapon.~ + sa1scar.43
++ ~I don?t want to talk about this anymore.~ + sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.42
SAY ~They have their uses, believe me.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.46
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.43
SAY ~Well?she was very limber.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.46
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.44
SAY ~So did she.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.46
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.45
SAY ~No.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.46
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.46
SAY ~Why so much interest in my private affairs, <CHARNAME>?~
++ ~I certainly have my share of bedroom battle scars. (You tilt your head to the side and push your shirt off your shoulder to show him the small but deep scar.) Fell out of bed and right onto his weapon belt. Very graceful.~ + sa1scar.show
++ ~My private life has left me with my share of scars as well, not all of them physical. I daresay you understand that feeling as well.~ + sa1scar.alike
++ ~My skin does not scar, but I have my share of wounds?on the inside.~ + sa1scar.none
++ ~Interest? Enough of this. We should get some rest.~ + sa1scar.end
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.show
SAY ~(Sarevok leans in close to see the scar, near enough to feel the heat of his body. After a moment, he raises his hand to touch the mar on your skin.)
++ ~(Stay still and let him touch you.)~ + sa1scar.show2
++ ~Looking for an excuse to touch me?~ + sa1scar.show1
++ ~(Jerk away before his hand gets near.)~ + sa1scar.amused
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.show1
SAY ~Only as much as you were looking for an excuse to show me your body.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.show2
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.show2
SAY ~(His fingers are rough and callused against your sensitive skin, but his touch is gentle as his intense eyes hold your gaze.) Careful. A sister should not look at her brother like that.~
++ ~And a brother should not touch his sister like that.~ + sa1scar.show3
++ ~Like what?~ + sa1scar.show4
++ ~(Lean closer to him, your faces only inches apart.)~ + sa1scar.show5
++ ~(Pull away from him and hastily rearrange your clothes.)~ + sa1scar.amused
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.show3
SAY ~You don?t seem to mind.~
IF ~~ + sa1scar.show5
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.show4
SAY ~Don?t play coy.~
IF ~~ sa1scar.show5
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.show5
SAY ~(There is a sense of uncertainty in his eyes, but he seems to realize something and pulls away from you.) Do not play games with me, <CHARNAME>. (With that warning, he stalks away.)~
IF ~~ EXIT
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.alike
SAY ~Ah, so you believe we have something in common then? You know nothing about me, sister.~
IF ~~ EXIT
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.none
SAY ~Your skin does not scar? Then what do you have to remind you of your mistakes? No, nevermind. Go to bed, <CHARNAME>.~
IF ~~ EXIT
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.amused
SAY ~(Sarevok looks amused and even chuckles darkly under his breath as he steps away from you.) Come, little sister. I believe it?s past your bedtime.~
IF ~~ EXIT
END

IF ~~ sa1scar.end
SAY ~Very well.~
IF ~~ EXIT
END

[Icendoan]

I cannot see any obvious code errors, but then I am terrible at debugging code.

I cannot understand the beginning though. If it starts out with the PC, is it in a PID (Player-Initiated-Dialogue), if so, you need something like this for your block:

IF ~True()~ THEN BEGIN pid1
SAY ~(You see Sarevok Anchev...)~
++ ~text~ + trans
list
END

or

IF ~IsGabber(Player1)~ THEN BEGIN pid1
...

like Berelinde said.

This is due to the game taking the highest state (first in the dialogue file, disregarding weight) with all conditions true. Leaving it empty is something like "Ok only if you direct here with a transition. It cannot start here", so remember to leave your default dialogue on True() or something along those lines, or you will get "NPC has nothing to say to you".

Icen

[Aeryn]

That's because there is no starting point yet. I'm thinking now that the best would be a rest trigger that starts something along the lines of "(You see Sarevok sitting apart from the rest of your companions, cleaning his armor...)." So, yeah, the beginning is incomplete, for the additional reason that I want Epitomy and and HighTime to be able to use it however they see fit in the long run, meaning as a rest event, a PC initiated dialog, etc and so on.

For the record, this in no way satisfies my desire to see a scar flirt as well...you know something late-romance like "Kiss Sarevok's scars." The possibilities are...endless...

[Lykainon]

For the record, this in no way satisfies my desire to see a scar flirt as well...you know something late-romance like "Kiss Sarevok's scars." The possibilities are...endless...

I have clearly underestimated the advantage of scars in my relations to the opposite sex, I should really get some (which might be an issue since I really don't like pain ). Then again, I suspect I might need to grow to seven feet tall, build lots of muscles, get glowy contact lenses and a really big sword for the effects to fully kick in.

[HighTimeRodeo]

Hmm, I'll have to remember that.

Thank you, Aeryn, for coming up with other answers and if you don't mind, I'd like to use them. And too, for not re-writing the dialog I posted. I will make the changes and try to 'Sarevok-it up a bit'.

I know that action dialog does not fit in the game, but it is how I write.

That said...

I wrote a 'steamy scene' and I'll send it to you as soon as I find your e-mail address that doesn't run through here 'cause it's pretty, er, graphic.

EDIT: Oh, I forgot to mention...

I love the dialog with Haer'Dalis! It was hilarious and I love the poems you picked for it. If only we didn't have to get permission to use them...

Edited by HighTimeRodeo, 13 January 2009 - 04:10 PM.