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Comments on "The Chronicles of Estra"

Started by Shadowhawke, Jul 26 2008 05:28 PM

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#1 Shadowhawke

Starlight Seeker

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Posted 26 July 2008 - 05:28 PM

First of all, a hearty welcome to Scribbles, Soulfire! :cheers:

I'm sorry that it's taken so long for me to put up a comment... the beginning of Uni again has put somewhat of a dampener on my time. But I have managed to read the first few parts of your story, and I just wanted to drop you a line and tell you that your worldbuilding is admirably detailed. I look forwards to reading more when I have the time!

Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love

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And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain

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#2 Soulfire

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Posted 29 July 2008 - 02:31 AM

Thanks, Shadow! Like I think I mentioned in the other topic, the pointing out of inconsistencies, errors and the like will be gratefully received. Looking over some of my old stuff, though... A lot of it just seems *awful*. Then again, that's the reason I leave my old fanfiction up on the Net - to make myself shudder in horror whenever I decide to reread it again.

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