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And as always, Rizdaer and Anariel's parts were fantastic
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Posted 23 November 2008 - 02:49 PM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 23 November 2008 - 04:15 PM
Posted 23 November 2008 - 07:12 PM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 16 February 2009 - 03:57 AM
Classic Adventures - a Total Conversion compilation dedicated to bringing many of the old and new PnP modules into the wonderfully dangerous world that is Baldur's Gate II. Fancy link button to Downloads page.
CA Forum. Bugs to be squashed, feedback to be welcomed!
Website at: http://classicadventuresmod.com/
~***~***~***~
When in doubt, lockpick a mudcrab!
Beware the nug conspiracy!
Posted 16 February 2009 - 09:18 AM
Heya Celticrose!
Bit of catching up here, a rather impressive amount of detail in all the scenes from my tell, a particular jewel stands out with the dinner conversation in the most recent chapter you've blessed us with.
To be honest I was a little surprised by Ulbrec's character, seemed a bit different to his usual half-grumpy drill instructor self.
Posted 16 February 2009 - 03:41 PM
A well laid fire within the hearth, chased away the chill of the evening. Its heat beckoned, as did the goblets of wine, hard ciders, and tankards of golden ale, that had been set up on the side board.
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 16 February 2009 - 04:53 PM
Posted 16 February 2009 - 06:38 PM
Jewel being the metaphor for the scene.What jewel? Oh please don't make me guess! lol I had a rough time with the dinner conversation, rewrote it several times . . . so please, put me out of my misery and tell me what you felt stood out, in a good way? a bad way?
Classic Adventures - a Total Conversion compilation dedicated to bringing many of the old and new PnP modules into the wonderfully dangerous world that is Baldur's Gate II. Fancy link button to Downloads page.
CA Forum. Bugs to be squashed, feedback to be welcomed!
Website at: http://classicadventuresmod.com/
~***~***~***~
When in doubt, lockpick a mudcrab!
Beware the nug conspiracy!
Posted 16 February 2009 - 09:11 PM
Jewel being the metaphor for the scene.What jewel? Oh please don't make me guess! lol I had a rough time with the dinner conversation, rewrote it several times . . . so please, put me out of my misery and tell me what you felt stood out, in a good way? a bad way?
The subtle workings are the bits that particularly let it shine, well worth the effort you've put into it methinks.
Posted 23 February 2009 - 10:56 AM
Posted 23 February 2009 - 10:34 PM
I have to say I've greatly enjoyed the latest chapter. The dinner scene was wonderfully done and with such a variety of characters and temperaments. I'm almost tempted to ask you for your secret, how do you write banters? I actually love the slow buildup of the story since I hope it'll be very long so I can enjoy it all the more.
Hope to see another chapter soon but be sure to take your time and enjoy the writing
Posted 25 February 2009 - 12:26 AM
Posted 26 June 2012 - 01:00 AM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 01 July 2012 - 01:25 PM
Posted 22 January 2013 - 04:31 AM
Hi CelticRose. Great to see another chapter up, sorry it took me so long to comment!
What can I say? It was amazing to see Ruach get his comeuppance from everyone. Really enjoyed that part. Not to mention, the fate you consigned him to, as well as the final image you left us with was exquisite.
Regarding your author's notes, it sounds like you've had an amazingly busy time recently and I think everyone understands that real life comes first. I, for one, am just really glad this story is still alive. Thanks, best of luck with real life, and I look forward to the next chapter, whenever it may be.
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 26 January 2013 - 03:31 PM
Thank-you Shadowhawke, I appreciate your review and am glad that I did not disappoint.
The spiders were all Rizdaer's idea and I had to give in to him since I wouldn't let him out and out
kill Ruach, who I might add shall remain a threat much later in the future . . .
For now I think the little group must endeavor to move on.
Again, thank-you for your comments . . .
Til the next chapter,
CelticRose