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[Epantiras]

And you're using heavier than usual shading on the elf, me likes. Hm, actually, I think the orc too could use a few highlights, especially on his face, the details are kinda lost in the dark.

100% agree with Legion ;-)

[Aliya]

*remembers Kivan and Tazok* Yep...

[flysoup]

*remembers Kivan and Tazok* Yep...

Yea they sure have a similar friendship as in the image

Anyway I edited the image, see the result in the old post. Inked Bg Comic page 31 today and will probably color it tomorrow and come up with some text for it.

[WeeRLegion]

Mhm. I'd imagine the facial details are now a bit brighter then. Takes less focus time to get 'em. @_@
It's colder now, I kinda liked the red doomy-glow about the first version, but that's a tiny thing.

Only new gripe are the somewhat shoddy clouds in the background; they work in the foreground because there's details behind them, but background, it's just clear sky there. .p

But let's leave it at that, it's a fine piece of work!
Though that orc's definitely ahead of his age in the steroids department. .p

[flysoup]

Deleted this comic page. For the new comic visit: http://bhaalspawn.com/

I chose to do this so that there wont be any confusing between the old and newly crafted/edited comic pages.
Other than that thanks you all for the constructive criticism and the inspiring words. Hope to meet you all at the
new Bhaalspawn site. The comic wouldn't have developed to what it has if it wasn't from the aid of you all.

All the best and many thanks/
Michael H Bhaalspawn

Edited by flysoup, 25 March 2010 - 02:27 PM.

[Icendoan]

Hmmm, I though Imoen came about 10 years later than CHARNAME, and with Winthrop.

Icen

[flysoup]

Hmmm, I though Imoen came about 10 years later than CHARNAME, and with Winthrop.

Icen

Yea you are correct about that, but as the novel and the game differs in story and content so does my comic. I take some artistic freedom here and there and hope that it is ok for the reader.

Best regards,
Michael/flysoup/bgcomic among all

[WeeRLegion]

Ah, yes, if Flysoup would be following the canon tightly the thugs murdering Gorion would have been spinning around axes and doing silly acrobatics like no tomorrow. And Abdel would have stared them down until they shat their pants.

So, ah...
Nice page again, good harmonious colors. @_@

[Silinde Ar-Feiniel]

Wonderful page! Lovely family scene! I love artistic freedom! It just gives you a reason to make something different! I love a story when i don't know the end!

[Aliya]

Brief memories?

[darlarosa]

awww so bittersweet.....keep writing/drawing...I COMMAND IT....IT FUELS ME!!

[flysoup]

Deleted this comic page. For the new comic visit: http://bhaalspawn.com/

I chose to do this so that there wont be any confusing between the old and newly crafted/edited comic pages.
Other than that thanks you all for the constructive criticism and the inspiring words. Hope to meet you all at the
new Bhaalspawn site. The comic wouldn't have developed to what it has if it wasn't from the aid of you all.

All the best and many thanks/
Michael H Bhaalspawn

Edited by flysoup, 25 March 2010 - 02:27 PM.

[Silinde Ar-Feiniel]

I love the transformation! It looks great! Can we hope into a complete slayer transformation later?

[Aliya]

Awww... The Slayer?

[flysoup]

I love the transformation! It looks great! Can we hope into a complete slayer transformation later?

We will see

Awww... The Slayer?

Maybe, yes

Until we get to know more about the possible Slayer transformation, here are our dynamic duo in a stylish transformation:

[WeeRLegion]

Now Gorion, what did you expect when you failed to mention that whetstones are not good for brushing teeth with? .p

[flysoup]

Now Gorion, what did you expect when you failed to mention that whetstones are not good for brushing teeth with? .p

[Epantiras]

almost looks like Abdel was going to *eat* Gorion o_O just because seeing the pic of young Abdel with fangs next to the other image gives me that feeling

[flysoup]

Deleted this comic page. For the new comic visit: http://bhaalspawn.com/

I chose to do this so that there wont be any confusing between the old and newly crafted/edited comic pages.
Other than that thanks you all for the constructive criticism and the inspiring words. Hope to meet you all at the
new Bhaalspawn site. The comic wouldn't have developed to what it has if it wasn't from the aid of you all.

All the best and many thanks/
Michael H Bhaalspawn

Edited by flysoup, 25 March 2010 - 02:28 PM.

[Icendoan]

Xan casts Sleep and hits them with a sword, and they die very fast!

Icen