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[flysoup]

(I am in vague plans to change the style later on with a more sketchy black and white artwork were I will use a brush and ink.) Just an idea to bring more 'life' into the artwork. But I must find the right page to do implement that change in.

do you mean something shaded like your pencil drawings? I agree it woul dbring more life to the artwork, but it's hard to say bye bye to colors v_v you could implement the change once the backstories of npcs are over and you start the actual story. maybe you could draw some 'test' pages, maybe a panel with people talking, then a panel with a landscape then a panel with people fighting, just to see if this new style works with the main comic content ;-)

You are right about the forehead issue but I am a forehead fetish Still what I edited above is that I lowered the hair and the tiara now. Thanks for the constructive criticism

Peace

[Epantiras]

it looks better now

[flysoup]

From one forehead issue Drow to another Drow with a ostrich legs issue

Here is Solaufein with his ostrich legs

[Aliya]

Great anatomy, fly! And cloak, is so cute!

[Epantiras]

I forgot to write in my DA comment that the problem with his legs is that imho his feet point too much inward and we see them whole: it looks as he's standing on points; we should see just his toes and little of his feet instead ;-)
btw I wonder why the image of male drow nobles wearing that golden thing on their forehead is so popular? I know this comes fromt he early images of 'old' Drizzt http://frootbat31.fi...04/starless.jpg as he's wearing one in the books about his past, but it seems he doesn't wear it in later books. The newest images of him, drawn by Lockwood (I'm starting to think of him as Drizzt's 'official' artist) portrait him as young and not wearing that 'tiara' http://www.toddlockw.../1000_det01.jpg

Edited by Epantiras, 29 August 2008 - 12:18 PM.

[flysoup]

I forgot to write in my DA comment that the problem with his legs is that imho his feet point too much inward and we see them whole: it looks as he's standing on points; we should see just his toes and little of his feet instead ;-)
btw I wonder why the image of male drow nobles wearing that golden thing on their forehead is so popular? I know this comes fromt he early images of 'old' Drizzt http://frootbat31.fi...04/starless.jpg as he's wearing one in the books about his past, but it seems he doesn't wear it in later books. The newest images of him, drawn by Lockwood (I'm starting to think of him as Drizzt's 'official' artist) portrait him as young and not wearing that 'tiara' http://www.toddlockw.../1000_det01.jpg

But maybe he 'is' standing on points I drew the tiara due to that he has one on the portrait for the Solaufein npc mod, even though that portrait might be a visualization on Drizzt for real.

Edited by flysoup, 29 August 2008 - 03:55 PM.

[WeeRLegion]

Good otherwise, but I didn't know drow kept their manparts on the rear-side. .p

Srsly, that doesn't look very manly. xP

[flysoup]

Good otherwise, but I didn't know drow kept their manparts on the rear-side. .p

Srsly, that doesn't look very manly. xP

When have ever a drow or a elf looked manly before?

[WeeRLegion]

A fair point. xP

*Snicker* Fair *Snicker*

[Epantiras]

Good otherwise, but I didn't know drow kept their manparts on the rear-side. .p
Srsly, that doesn't look very manly. xP

lol

When have ever a drow or a elf looked manly before?

died because lol'd too much
wow that's why my NWN character's surname is 'Elfsbane'. Someone needs to exterminate those little effeminate servants of Santa just kidding
BTW http://forgottenreal...lationcover.jpg

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Everyone draws drow lumpy

[flysoup]

Everyone draws drow lumpy

They are lumpy due to all the spider bites.

[flysoup]

Deleted this comic page. For the new comic visit: http://bhaalspawn.com/

I chose to do this so that there wont be any confusing between the old and newly crafted/edited comic pages.
Other than that thanks you all for the constructive criticism and the inspiring words. Hope to meet you all at the
new Bhaalspawn site. The comic wouldn't have developed to what it has if it wasn't from the aid of you all.

All the best and many thanks/
Michael H Bhaalspawn

Edited by flysoup, 25 March 2010 - 02:19 PM.

[Aliya]

Only side point. Why Matron has red eyes, and Viccy, normal human eyes? For Valas, cruel punishment... Nice comic!

Edited by Aliya, 04 September 2008 - 06:25 AM.

[flysoup]

Only side point. Why Matron has red eyes, and Viccy, normal human eyes? For Valas, cruel punishment... Nive comic!

Just using my artistic freedom neglecting what is logical

[Aliya]

I think it would be better, if you add some tear to panel with Viccy's eye. It would be more sensitive.

[flysoup]

I think it would be better, if you add some tear to panel with Viccy's eye. It would be more sensitive.

I added fear into her eye instead. I bet that fear is the first reaction in such a situation. The tears comes later on when she can ventilate about what happened.

[Epantiras]

I added fear into her eye instead. I bet that fear is the first reaction in such a situation. The tears comes later on when she can ventilate about what happened.

I can imagine Vicona saying 'a noble drow priestess crying??? I'm not a worthless male bugbear!'. just kidding
I agree with Flysoup's choice, I dont' think she'd cry in front of a matron mother, only later once she's alone and she realizes that she's become an outcast

[Aliya]

I added fear into her eye instead. I bet that fear is the first reaction in such a situation. The tears comes later on when she can ventilate about what happened.

I can imagine Vicona saying 'a noble drow priestess crying??? I'm not a worthless male bugbear!'. just kidding
I agree with Flysoup's choice, I dont' think she'd cry in front of a matron mother, only later once she's alone and she realizes that she's become an outcast

Maybe. Just a little tear, it would be sooo.... you know! Cool!

Edited by Aliya, 05 September 2008 - 09:19 AM.

[flysoup]

Deleted this comic page. For the new comic visit: http://bhaalspawn.com/

I chose to do this so that there wont be any confusing between the old and newly crafted/edited comic pages.
Other than that thanks you all for the constructive criticism and the inspiring words. Hope to meet you all at the
new Bhaalspawn site. The comic wouldn't have developed to what it has if it wasn't from the aid of you all.

All the best and many thanks/
Michael H Bhaalspawn

Edited by flysoup, 25 March 2010 - 02:19 PM.