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Started by flysoup, Nov 30 2007 08:39 AM

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#1 flysoup

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Posted 30 November 2007 - 08:39 AM

Hi there,

Chill out in flysoup's artcorner and share words and ideas. WazzuuuuUUUP!

Just though that it would be fun to hear what text you would have chosen to put in the speechbubbles of my illustration of a Beholder's conversation with Jan Jansen.

Get your authorminds together and post the genious suggestions you come up with.

Edited by flysoup, 15 December 2007 - 02:57 AM.

"Chef of Goblin Pies"

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#2 Jarno Mikkola

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Posted 30 November 2007 - 08:47 AM

Just an idiotic suggestion.

Beholder's: We'll eat that one.
Jan Jansen: Now remember, to try to hit the fifth one from the left.

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#3 Tassadar88

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Posted 30 November 2007 - 08:53 AM

B: No, please! I´d rather take the bolt than another of your stories, gnome!

JJ: ... come on, that is what the dragon kept saying too, but then if you knew my uncle...

(Jan´s cheesy tactic for taking down hearing endowed enemies)

The Mind is its own place and in itself - can make a Heaven of Hell, a Hell of Heaven. -John Milton, Paradise lost

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#4 Kellen

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Posted 30 November 2007 - 09:12 AM

Jan: Now this reminds me of that time, way back...

Beholder: If I have to hear another story about Uncle Stinky or Aunt Petunia, you'll be eating that crossbow for a week!

"She could resist temptation. Really she could. Sometimes. At least when it wasn't tempting." - Calli Slythistle
"She was a fire, and I had no doubt that she had already done her share of burning." - Lord Firael Algathrin
"Most assume that all the followers of Lathander are great morning people. They're very wrong." - Tanek of Cloakwood

we are all adults playing a fantasy together, - cmorgan

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#5 Crazee

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Posted 30 November 2007 - 03:18 PM

Jan: -tastes like turnips actually. You wouldn't have thought it. And lucky you don't, let me tell you. You see, my third cousin, Nora Nellyflop, learnt all about it during a bargain hunting tournament. Naturally she had inherited her mother's skill and was a shoe-in for victory..."

Beholder: Where's a vicious Bhaalspawn when you need one? If I had hands, I'd have plunged a dagger into my eye hours ago...

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You know, sometimes I wonder why Jan even bothers with weapons when he has that deadly mouth of his. I love that infuriating little gnome.

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#6 Azkyroth

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Posted 30 November 2007 - 03:21 PM

Beholder: "O RLY?"

Jan: "YA RLY."

"NO WAI!" is next panel, I presume.

(*hides*)

"Tyranny is a quiet thing at first, a prim and proper lady pursing her lips and shaking her head disapprovingly, asking, well what were you doing (wearing that dress, walking home at that hour, expressing those inappropriate thoughts) anyway? It's subtle and insidious, disguised as reasonable precautions which become more and more oppressive over time, until our lives are defined by the things we must avoid. She's easy enough to agree with, after all, she's only trying to help -- and yet she's one of the most dangerous influences we face, because if she prevails, it puts the raping, robbing, axe-wielding madmen of the world in complete control. Eventually they'll barely need to wield a thing, all they'll have to do is leer menacingly and we fall all over ourselves trying to placate them." -godlizard

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#7 flysoup

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Posted 01 December 2007 - 02:21 AM

Great ideas everyone!

I picked the Beholder suggestion from CrazeeFFan and the Jan Jansen text from Tassadar88 and put
them together.

"Chef of Goblin Pies"

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#8 flysoup

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Posted 01 December 2007 - 02:28 AM

Well after all the great suggestions for the Jan Jansen vs. Beholder here
comes a new one.

Xan vs. Ettercaps (I made this illustration as a giftart for a member at deviantART) link to my gallery: http://ballukas.deviantart.com/

Come up with your amazing suggestions for the speechbubble of Xan.

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#9 Neferit

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Posted 01 December 2007 - 03:07 AM

Well, the only lines which occur me now are just

"You're all doomed..." (yup, you, not "me" nor "we")

or

"(What is the point in fighting them?)" (yeah, this would be just thinking, not saying it aloud)

Edited by Neferit, 01 December 2007 - 03:08 AM.

Heck no, b - I used the word the way I use things like "twitter", and "iPod" - my first inclination is to ask "what birdcall are you studying?" and I think of "I pod, You (singular) pod, He pods, She pods, They pod, You (plural) pod, We pod..."

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#10 Kellen

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Posted 01 December 2007 - 08:24 AM

Life is so hollow.

"She could resist temptation. Really she could. Sometimes. At least when it wasn't tempting." - Calli Slythistle
"She was a fire, and I had no doubt that she had already done her share of burning." - Lord Firael Algathrin
"Most assume that all the followers of Lathander are great morning people. They're very wrong." - Tanek of Cloakwood

we are all adults playing a fantasy together, - cmorgan

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#11 Amaurea

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Posted 01 December 2007 - 08:43 AM

"...sigh.... At least they're not kobolds..."

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#12 Jarno Mikkola

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Posted 01 December 2007 - 08:56 AM

"Why should I even try."

^_^

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#13 Deathsangel

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Posted 06 December 2007 - 08:13 AM

Even though the speechbubble is already filled on your site:

"This is so utterly futile"

(In this case ppl can fill in their own thoughts if Xan is talking for himself or against the ettercaps)

Still modding the Mod for the Wicked... It is a big project you know... And I got sidetracked (several times) a bit... sorry.
However, as we all know, Evil never really sleeps.

Sentences marking (my) life:

Winds of change... Endure them, and in Enduring grow Stronger
It takes a fool to look for logic in a man's heart
Never question the sanity of the insane
The Harmony of Life is Chaos
Living on Wings of Dreams

(1st march 2009) SHS women over me:
Kat: if there were more guys that looked like you out here, people's offspring wouldnt be so damn ugly
Noctalys: you are adorable

~~ I love it, and I am humbled! Yay! ~~

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#14 Kulyok

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Posted 06 December 2007 - 12:48 PM

Your own text is really good enough.

IWD NPC, Xan, The Sellswords, Back to Brynnlaw, Assassinations, Dungeon Crawl, Reunion, Branwen, Coran, Tiax, Xan BG1 Friendship
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#15 flysoup

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Posted 07 December 2007 - 03:27 AM

Your own text is really good enough.

Thanks Kulyok :hug:

Anyway here is the result of our brainstorming, took some suggestions and mixed them with the edit that
it is the Ettercap that speaks.

"Chef of Goblin Pies"

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#16 Deathsangel

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Posted 07 December 2007 - 04:27 AM

Okay sorry, but tan I liked your original version better I don't even think ettercaps can speak... right... wrong? :unsure:

Still modding the Mod for the Wicked... It is a big project you know... And I got sidetracked (several times) a bit... sorry.
However, as we all know, Evil never really sleeps.

Sentences marking (my) life:

Winds of change... Endure them, and in Enduring grow Stronger
It takes a fool to look for logic in a man's heart
Never question the sanity of the insane
The Harmony of Life is Chaos
Living on Wings of Dreams

(1st march 2009) SHS women over me:
Kat: if there were more guys that looked like you out here, people's offspring wouldnt be so damn ugly
Noctalys: you are adorable

~~ I love it, and I am humbled! Yay! ~~

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#17 flysoup

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Posted 07 December 2007 - 08:14 AM

Okay sorry, but tan I liked your original version better I don't even think ettercaps can speak... right... wrong?

Well they do speak, at least they make sounds like riaurgh rhagrrrr skrieeek, I just translated it into english. :whistling:

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#18 SpAE

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Posted 09 December 2007 - 04:00 AM

Ha! Gotta love that...now to hunt down this mysterious original version.

When's the next comic coming, please?

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#19 Deathsangel

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Posted 10 December 2007 - 01:14 AM

Ha! Gotta love that...now to hunt down this mysterious original version. When's the next comic coming, please?

The original version was on flysoup's site where there are also the comics (who he hasn't updated

). It stated something like (not exact but it was the essence of it):

What is the point? Why don't I just lay down and die?

Still modding the Mod for the Wicked... It is a big project you know... And I got sidetracked (several times) a bit... sorry.
However, as we all know, Evil never really sleeps.

Sentences marking (my) life:

Winds of change... Endure them, and in Enduring grow Stronger
It takes a fool to look for logic in a man's heart
Never question the sanity of the insane
The Harmony of Life is Chaos
Living on Wings of Dreams

(1st march 2009) SHS women over me:
Kat: if there were more guys that looked like you out here, people's offspring wouldnt be so damn ugly
Noctalys: you are adorable

~~ I love it, and I am humbled! Yay! ~~

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#20 flysoup

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Posted 15 December 2007 - 03:15 AM

Ha! Gotta love that...now to hunt down this mysterious original version. When's the next comic coming, please?

The original version was on flysoup's site where there are also the comics (who he hasn't updated ). It stated something like (not exact but it was the essence of it):

What is the point? Why don't I just lay down and die?

Howdy folks and a major sorry for the lack of updates on my comic/art site but I have been sucked up by reality and also
been gaming Neverwinternights and creating modules until my eyes got bloodred.

The Hackslash Realms comic is awaiting for me to buy the bluepen I need/want for the creation of that comic, they were out of stock in the store I use to buy them in....DAMMIT!

Neverless here comes a bg TOB final battle 2nd page. The first page can be seen in the Final Battle challenge here at Spellhold.

Good speed!

"Chef of Goblin Pies"

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