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#1 Isilven

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Posted 18 November 2006 - 11:48 PM

It started as a very spontaneous RP between my boyfriend and I, and I converted it to fanfic.
Time frame is between the "W-what are you planning?" conversation, and the taking of Imoen's soul.
Tell me whatcha think.

Edited by Isilven, 18 November 2006 - 11:51 PM.

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#2 Kaeloree

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Posted 19 November 2006 - 12:11 AM

<3 is quite what I think.

#3 Shadowhawke

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Posted 21 November 2006 - 09:50 PM

Very nice work! is what I think :). Beautifully written. I must admit, I never saw Imoen's incarceration period in Spellhold working out quite that way, but it rung well nonetheless. Are you thinking of anything more? :)

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#4 Justyn Kase

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Posted 09 February 2007 - 12:13 AM

You know, I like the idea of putting your own ideas into a story, how it's shapes itself into a craft.  Your interpretation of what happened inside Spellhold is so far, excellent.  I do hope you continue and give us a little more of your perspective on what happened inside, and the tortures Imoen had no choice but to endure.
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#5 DalreïDal

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Posted 09 February 2007 - 06:49 AM

OK, OK, alright, I admit it, I read it, and I liked it... so I guess I have to post a review :) Here it is :P

(err, no, seriously, I'm in a kind of lack of inspiration for reviews right now. Will a simple but sincere expression of my appreciation in this form be satisfying?)
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