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[Shadowhawke]

Back again! I love your updates, Lightspeed. And I agree with Deathsangel. [whines] "Mummmmmmmyyyyy... why can't I have a sword like that?"

Heh, anyway, yes. Nice work. No nitpicking here for the moment! Keep going, I can't wait for the next installation!

Oh, and that'd better be no empty threat

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I make no empty threats, my friend...

[Erephine]

Thanks.

I hope you're back for good this time, hmm?

[Shadowhawke]

Hopefully.

[Erephine]

Heh, pre-emptive apologies for the confusion - finally got around to adding the prologue I had planned on writing along with the last update.

[Vita Muerte]

I would like to commend you on this story. :thumb:

I'm a new member, but have been following your story the last few months. I hope you can overcome your writer's block so we can be continue to enjoy a story that is well written.

[Erephine]

First of all, thank you very much for reading and commenting.

I'm glad you enjoyed it so far.

Aand... I've kept my promise... and actually posted a new part just now ^.^

[Vita Muerte]

Loving it!

[Shadowhawke]

So sorry I haven't updated here for so long, Lightspeed! . I'm back, now, though. And you won't be able to get rid of me. . Love your new updates. The plot is unravelling really well, and I love your characterizations. It's very well written, too! Good work again!

[Erephine]

Thank you very much for commenting

I'm glad you're enjoying it, although I... feel parts of it will have to undergo... some serious polishing once it's complete?

As my free time permits, I've been working on the next part, but it's especially tricky to write, and I wouldn't forgive myself messing it up... so... I'm still not entirely happy with it, hmm? ^.^ It should be up soon if there's no unforeseen problems, though.

And you won't be able to get rid of me.

Ohh... I'm so incredibly sad about that.

[Shadowhawke]

Thank you very much for commenting   

No problem, Lightspeed.

I'm glad you're enjoying it, although I... feel parts of it will have to undergo... some serious polishing once it's complete? 

Don't worry about that. It's in an author's nature to go back and polish. :closedeyes:

As my free time permits, I've been working on the next part, but it's especially tricky to write, and I wouldn't forgive myself messing it up... so... I'm still not entirely happy with it, hmm? ^.^ It should be up soon if there's no unforeseen problems, though. 

Can't wait for it

And you won't be able to get rid of me.

Ohh... I'm so incredibly sad about that.

So you should be

[Erephine]

Ack. Very, very sorry for the long delay.

I'm still not really happy with that specific part, but I've kept you waiting long enough. I 'll polish it later, hmm?

[Shadowhawke]

No need to worry about the quality, friend! This is amazing! You're... evil to leave us with such a cliffhanger! But I still love you anyway.

[Vita Muerte]

I agree. I find your spin on the classic rather interesting. :thumb: Please don?t give up on your story... it?s better than you think. Hope to see more of it soon.

[Erephine]

No need to worry about the quality, friend! This is amazing! You're... evil to leave us with such a cliffhanger!    But I still love you anyway. 

Aww... thank you! ^.^

I agree.  I find your spin on the classic rather interesting.  :thumb:  Please don?t give up on your story... it?s better than you think.  Hope to see more of it soon. 

I won't give it up... certainly not. It might be better than I think, but that's not really a big deal... given my opinion about my own work?

There should be more soon, unless something really unexpected interfers. Don't worry, I won't leave you with that cliffhanger

[Shadowhawke]

Lightspeed! I'm happy to see you back with a new chapter. I really like the way your writing is just so evocative, it's like I can see Eandryth's fight in my head. . Brilliant chapter once again, my friend. Hope we can see more soon!

[Erephine]

I'm so sorry I made you wait this long... you know some of the why, but it's hardly an excuse

I originally planned to post more, but that would have meant more waiting, as the next part still isn't finished.

[Vita Muerte]

Hey, if your chapters are gonna be this good, by all means take your time. I like your style; you don?t compromise or give away too much, which in turn gives the story a shroud of intrigue.

"I have failed you again, Siane. Forgive me."

Eandryth and Siane had a very close relationship, and seeing poignant little glimpses of it as the story develops is rather compelling. The one thing I still can?t wrap my mind around is aunty Immy?s death. (Besides Viccy, Immy is my fav vanilla npc.)

Eagerly awaiting your next installment.

[Shadowhawke]

I'm so sorry I made you wait this long... you know some of the why, but it's hardly an excuse 

I originally planned to post more, but that would have meant more waiting, as the next part still isn't finished. 

Don't beat yourself up about it, Lightspeed. . As Vita Muerte said, we love your style and your story so much anyway. And your excuse is more than just an excuse. It's a very good reason.

[Shadowhawke]

Don't worry about the quality of the new chapter, my friend. . And yes, the missing links are now slowly coming to light. I love the way you wrote that last part, Lightspeed. It almost made me cry too. Ah, poor Eandryth... the guilt must hurt like crazy. Eagerly awaiting the next installment.

[Erephine]

Good to hear, that things are becoming clear now... for if they wouldn't I'd be a lousy storyteller indeed.

We're almost there, probably no more than two or three posts before I hit the end. Hopefully the progress of polishing and reworking will be faster ^.^

Then again, I've had the crazy idea to include chapter images with the final version.