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[Shadowhawke]

Nice work, Lightspeed. I particularly like the poetry... and the way you've developed the story. A cliffhanger at the end of each post, too! . Meanie. .

I look forward to more.

[Erephine]

Thanks for reading and commenting

The last er... five days were hard on my nerves, watching the Topic Views rise and rise without anyone dropping a comment. Especially since the only real reason behind this would fall under

If you have suggestions or ideas, provide them, but in a respectful manner. If you hated the story and can't think of a way to say anything in a respectful manner, don't comment.

So yes, thank you. :thumb:

[Shadowhawke]

No problem, Lightspeed. Trust me, I know the feeling. Sitting at the computer monitor and checking desperately... biting your fingernails...

It is good, however. There's the makings of a great story in there. I look forwards to reading more.

[Celestine]

Now I'm one of those guilty ones but only I had nothing to comment. err.

Anyhow, I just read the new chapter and you got my interest. I look forward to reading more.

[Erephine]

Thanks for commenting.

[Celestine]

salvation at last for the poor girl, or is it not? look forward to more.

sorry about posting a comment in your story thread. i click the wrong thread link. I'll pm a mod to delete it.

[Erephine]

Don't worry, I'm sure one of the mods will clean it up

[Jolyth]

An extremely interesting and attention grabbing start Lightspeed. I do hope to see some more in the near future.

A suggestion if I may. It is a bit hard to read when the paragraphs run on for so long. Perhaps a bit more seperation? It would be easier on the eyes.

sorry about posting a comment in your story thread. i click the wrong thread link. I'll pm a mod to delete it.

Done.

[Kaos]

Very interesting so far, Lightspeed.
  I hope you post more often then I do !

[Erephine]

Thanks for reading and commenting

And thanks for clearing the thread, Jolyth :thumb:

[Shadowhawke]

Nice work, Lightspeed! :thumb: . I'm sorry I haven't commented for a long time. I'm afraid my only excuse is that I'm lazy.
As always, your poetry is beautiful, and your writing is quite evocative and flowing. Never lose that touch, Lightspeed. Never, or I'll hunt you down and make you write like this again.
Looking forward to more.

[Erephine]

Nice work, Lightspeed!  :thumb: . I'm sorry I haven't commented for a long time. I'm afraid my only excuse is that I'm lazy.
As always, your poetry is beautiful, and your writing is quite evocative and flowing. Never lose that touch, Lightspeed. Never, or I'll hunt you down and make you write like this again. 
Looking forward to more. 

Thank you.

I am honoured by your comment

Oh, and that'd better be no empty threat

[Erephine]

Hear hear, the next piece is up.

I've had a bit of writer's block the last days, so I'm a bit dubious about its quality.

[Celestine]

argh cliffhanger. so many questions in my mind, come on post quick. I need the fix. hehe.

[Erephine]

Thanks for commenting

[Kaos]

Lightspeed,
  You've definitely grabbed my interests now.  Not many people have the intestinal fortitude to kill of Imoen, among other things.    Keep the story coming!

[Erephine]

Thanks for commenting

Glad you're still enjoying it.

[Deathsangel]

Read for the first time a fan fic. You got me Lightspeed. Jeez, I almost would say forget the area I asked you to make. Make more of this! It is incredibilly well written. The idea is superb and though I guessed after the second post that Oenone was daughter of Siane (based on BG1 Bhaalspawn)

May I ask if Eandryth is from Isewind Dale (wrongly written but you get my meaning) series? I don't have this game, but since she comes from the north. I don't know if Isewind Dale takes place around Waterdeep, but I know it to be in the north. I'm just curious.

The tension of the combat is nice. Also the uncertainty (something they said made X-files so popular) is a good point. I am even wondering if Minsc might be alive and if Edwin just 'covered' the truth about his leaving. Perhaps there were even more members after Edwin left. He was just dropped out of the group for his 'character'. What I get out of the story of Imoen and Oenone and what people Eandryth would be with, I wonder if Siane just was a bad judge of character about Edwin. Thinking him a combination of Minsc and Kivan type of character in boosting and holding people of. I even wonder if Eandryth is a Bhaalspawn due to the part of the weakness, where Read for the first time a fan fic. You got me Lightspeed. Jeez, I almost would say forget the area I asked you to make. Make more of this! It is incredibilly well written. The idea is superb and though I guessed after the second post that Oenone was daughter of Siane (based on BG1 Bhaalspawn)

May I ask if Eandryth is from Isewind Dale (wrongly written but you get my meaning) series? I don't have this game, but since she comes from the north. I don't know if Isewind Dale takes place around Waterdeep, but I know it to be in the north. I'm just curious.

The tension of the combat is nice. Also the uncertainty (something they said made X-files so popular) is a good point. I am even wondering if Minsc might be alive and if Edwin just 'covered' the truth about his leaving. Perhaps there were even more members after Edwin left. He was just dropped out of the group for his 'character'. What I get out of the story of Imoen and Oenone and what people Eandryth would be with, I wonder if Siane just was a bad judge of character about Edwin. Thinking him a combination of Minsc and Kivan type of character in boosting and holding people of. I even wonder, if Eandryth is a Bhaalspawn, due to the part of the weakness where Eandryth says "I am not weak

All in all great fan fic :thumb:

[Erephine]

First of all, thanks for commenting. Being somewhat sceptic about my own work, feedback is an essential help to improve the quality of my writing.

Read for the first time a fan fic. You got me Lightspeed. Jeez, I almost would say forget the area I asked you to make. Make more of this! It is incredibilly well written. The idea is superb and though I guessed after the second post that Oenone was daughter of Siane (based on BG1 Bhaalspawn)

It's intended to be pretty much obvious at that point. There's more to come, though, especially how everything links together in the end.

As for your area; as I said, I'll get around to doing it when I feel like it/find the time. Actually doing it takes a day at most, or even less. Rest assured, it hasn't been forgotten.

May I ask if Eandryth is from Isewind Dale (wrongly written but you get my meaning) series? I don't have this game, but since she comes from the north. I don't know if Isewind Dale takes place around Waterdeep, but I know it to be in the north. I'm just curious.

Icewind Dale, and no. She's not based on an ID character. But still, your assumption is maybe closer to the truth than you could imagine. *mysterious wink*

All in all great fan fic :thumb: 

Thank you

[Deathsangel]

Crap! I want to be able to handle such a sword