
Do not kill me, but would you be able to make the hair black? I know it might destroy the structure of the hair, but worth a try, no? Also, what you might want to do with the bow staff is simply stand it on his right hand side, because right now it blends in and it is not quite clear what he is trying to do (it is obviosly the center of the bow, but he is neither aiming, no holding it at ease in this position. Here are a couple of pictures with bowmen handling bows in a pretty fantasy settings:
http://amoka.net/eng...soiaf/theon.JPG
http://amoka.net/eng.../asoiaf/xho.jpg