Let me be quick with the congratulations (I think the dialogs are great and "believable"), and on to the "flaws".
First, I seem to remember some spoken lines (selection sounds and so) were not "synchronized" with the text.
But maybe it's just my italian version?
Second... the paperdoll!!!

Hm, I understand you meant something special for him, but really, that one is absolutely out of place, it looks too "alien" for the game.
You have the specific avatar already, and not even CHARNAME is granted such a feature.
The paperdolls are equivalent for everyone, they're meant as a "symbolic" image just for the purpose of placing items: I'd suggest to use the same logic for Irenicus.
Opinions?