Comments on "The Nice Guy's Last Finish"
#21
Posted 15 August 2004 - 01:22 AM
Just to think about him bathing in a river...
#22
Posted 15 August 2004 - 02:19 AM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
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And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
#23
Posted 15 August 2004 - 09:01 PM
hehe. I will, i intend to, sorry for sitting on it for so long. Real life's a bitch sometimes.While you're waiting.... how about finishing your own story?
Pleaaassseeeee?
thinkinc, great chapter and I just love the way you write Sola. He seems almost real to me. This is one story I'll definitely be following up. Cheers..
#25
Posted 17 August 2004 - 05:27 AM
absolutely quality. i haven't played with Sola so i don't know whether your writing is canonical or not but i have played with Haer and you do write him very well.
can't wait for the next installments.
#26
Posted 17 August 2004 - 11:25 AM
Let me know what you think of my more in-depth backstory for Anomen. I am nixing his sister from the story, because I didn't think it was necessary. There will be other problems he will have with the Order.
Hopefully, this will help to better explain why Anomen acts like such a pompous ass so often.
#27
Posted 17 August 2004 - 12:57 PM
i feel sorry for Anomen! i understand what drives his arrogance and the whole foolishness of him! ohmygodohmygod!
dude, you rule
oooooh, but i do have an issue with the use of the word 'baptised'. i'm not up on my d&d lore, but were any god's followers baptised? at least in the way we see it (the christian thing)?
#28
Posted 17 August 2004 - 01:37 PM
#29
Posted 17 August 2004 - 08:19 PM
One thing puzzled me though, who's Elise supposed to be? If its Anomen's mother, she had a name, Morella i think. Don't mind me, I still love your story.
#30
Posted 17 August 2004 - 10:30 PM
edit edit edit edit....
#32
Posted 31 August 2004 - 11:42 AM
Is it true that Tieflings don't dream? Or did you make up this very nice detail? Just curious (I'm not canonical )
Anomen...oh well...poor boy. Pompous, arrogant and yet, some of us cannot help but love his golden, righteous heart especially when it begins to show.
So where's the next chapter? Will Solaufein return only to find Haer'Dalis missing because the tiefling didn't trust the drow's luck? Will Edwin face inqusition?
Very good and joyous read
Bey
EDIT: Anomen's mother was called Moirala, by the way.
Edited by Beyshaliban, 31 August 2004 - 12:45 PM.
#33 -Redgrave-
Posted 26 October 2004 - 10:54 PM
Where did you get the drow from, by the way? I love drow anything, but I don't know exactly what all the drow phrases were, and would love to know if there is a drow-english/english-drow dictionary/phrasebook that I have missed all these years.
Please finish it off!