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[TRANSLATION] The Chronicles of Severian : ready for the adventure?


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#1 Cool Coyote

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Posted 01 November 2008 - 01:26 PM

Hello,

Maybe some people here remember of The Chronicles of Severian, my mod project for BG2. I was Jack the Ripper here but I have lost my account and my nickname ><

Well, I have the pleasure to announce that this mod is 100% completed after 10 months of work, developped as Cool Coyote on LEGENDES, the french community around the modding with Infinity Engine. TCOS is for the moment in final bêta testing.

But I have a big problem to translate Severian from French to English : indeed, Red Knight is now too busy for this work and so I'm looking for some people who can master perfectly english and french. I can't pay a professionnal for doing that, it's too expensive for me : more than 500 euros...

Here are the caracteristics, numbers & content of the final version of TCOS :

* CARACTERISTICS :

- Developped for BG 2: SoA and the Watcher's Keep
- Add a new NPC for your team
- WeiDU mod
- Compatibility with Mac? Must check it

* CONTENT :

- A quest in three chapters : if Charname is a woman
- A quest in one chapter : if Charname is a man
- A romance : if Charname is a woman elf, half elf, human
- Soundtrack and voice pack -in french only-
- New items
- A familiar : Onyx the Shadow Wolf
- Banters & Interjections
- New race : Halfshade -Planar-
- New kit : Outlaw -Ranger kit-

* SOME NUMBERS :

- About 3700 lines of text
- 84 banters
- 103 interjections
- 17 new items including 4 news weapons
- 22 new characters
- 21 titles of soundtrack

SOME PICTURES & SCREENS FROM THE FINAL VERSION -Sorry, all is in french-

THE TRAILER :

http://fr.youtube.co...h?v=mpMGjLLGD4o

PORTRAITS

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SCREENSHOTS

Meeting with Severian :

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Meeting with Onyx :

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Example of Interjection : Saemon

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Smalls quests, some new characters :

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Example of Banter : Nalia & Severian

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Confrontations

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Dialogue of Romance :

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Some Items :

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ABOUT THE CHARACTERS

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Name : Severian Stark
Race : Halfshade
Class : Outlaw (Ranger Kit)
Age : 25
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Caractéristic : STR 14 CON 18 DEX 16 WIS 6 INT 10 CHA 14
Martial Habilities: Bastard Sword ** Long Bow * Two Weapons ***
Innates habilities (progressive) : Improved Invisibility

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Name : Onyx
Race : Shadow Wolf
Caracteristics : FOR 20 CON 14 DEX 19
Innates habilities : Improved Invisibility 3 times/day
Special - Leveling : Onyx takes levels at the same time of Severian
Special - Calling : Onyx is called with the Signet of the Wolf
Special - Langage : Onyx communicates with telepathy

SOUNDTRACK

You can download 2 titles of the soundtrack here :

http://www.megauploa.../fr/?d=R3HJSRZM

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=CE9COV6F
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Sorry for my bad english...It's horrible.

Now I must insist : I really need some translators...You would be so nice...

Salutations :)

Cool Coyote from LEGENDES : http://weiducommando...s.com/forum.htm

Edited by Choo Choo, 01 November 2008 - 04:13 PM.


#2 Kurokarasu

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Posted 01 November 2008 - 03:57 PM

My English is not perfect, but my mother tongue is French. I'm a full-time student, but if you don't mind it (and my lack of time), I would be glad to help you. I already checked your project on your website and found it interesting. If you want, we can discuss of the details by PM.

Edited by Kurokarasu, 01 November 2008 - 03:58 PM.


#3 Ankhes

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Posted 01 November 2008 - 04:12 PM

I've been waiting for progress on this one. A new romance that just needs to be translated! I'm excited about it and hope to have it soon. :)

#4 Choo Choo

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Posted 01 November 2008 - 04:12 PM

Topic moved to Resource Request forum, and topic title changed. :)

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#5 --Majes--

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Posted 02 November 2008 - 05:40 PM

I sooo wish I knew French. I've been bemoaning the fact that I don't a lot, lately. It seems there are an abundance of talented French mod makers out there.

This is one of my most-wanted mods, too. I really wish you luck in finding a translator! The only way I could do it would be using online translators, and, well, they're absolutely horrible.

#6 Cool Coyote

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Posted 03 November 2008 - 04:16 AM

Thanks for your support, it's appreciated and I really wish this mod available for the english speakers. I have some contacts like Kurokarazu and we will do our best for releasing Severian in english version but it will take a long time.
Indeed, as you said Majes, the online translators are really horrible and I want this translation perfect.

I'm ready to accept other helps for translating that and I keep optimistic.

Severian kisses all the women of this forum :wub: and want to have a beer with the others :cheers:

Edited by Cool Coyote, 03 November 2008 - 04:19 AM.


#7 Cool Coyote

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Posted 15 December 2008 - 10:52 AM

For people who can understand french here, The Chronicles of Severian will be available the 25th december 2008 :

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>> http://weiducommando...s.com/forum.htm <<

English translation in serious progression but not before year 2009.

#8 Irbis

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Posted 15 December 2008 - 11:02 AM

say i am ranthing but after nearly whole year you really could have BAMs for items more then just colored O.o like this adamentinum plate armor covered with white paint.
dont take it to seriously, after all BAMs are nothing compared to the whole of your work. thats just my personal thoughs.
EDIT: i know my post is offtopic, but then again the whole thread is offtopic as the part above "transalation need" is maybe 1/5 of the whole. and really... reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllyyy. dont take my words to seriously =) you wouldnt belive how much i wait for this mod to be done.

Edited by Irbis, 15 December 2008 - 11:27 AM.

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#9 Cool Coyote

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Posted 15 December 2008 - 03:54 PM

say i am ranthing but after nearly whole year you really could have BAMs for items more then just colored O.o like this adamentinum plate armor covered with white paint.
dont take it to seriously, after all BAMs are nothing compared to the whole of your work. thats just my personal thoughs.
EDIT: i know my post is offtopic, but then again the whole thread is offtopic as the part above "transalation need" is maybe 1/5 of the whole. and really... reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllyyy. dont take my words to seriously =) you wouldnt belive how much i wait for this mod to be done.


No problem Irbis, I accept all comments. :rolleyes:

But in fact, those screens are old now, the armor is more aesthetic now, I think, I have changed some details since I posted. But it's true I don't really know how to create pretty Bams, I have just imagination for the descriptions of those items. I'm better as director.

Thanks for your support, and Severian will have a beer with you if you accept. :cheers:

Edited by Cool Coyote, 15 December 2008 - 03:57 PM.