I am really unsure of this fic and showing it to anyone. I am not a native speaker of English, and I haven't written Baldur's Gate fanfics before.
I should also mention that I have been greatly influenced by Laufey's Edwin Romance Mod, so later on into the fic Edwin will play a big part, too. I'd say that this isn't only a fanfic for Baldur's Gate, but also to the Edwin Romance mod.
Rating around G - PG-13.
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Illustration for chapter
Chapter 1: Shadows in Candlekeep
?What are you planning for tonight, Jaina?? the tall but old man in grey robes asked the young girl.
?Finish the book on Amn, I think. It?s been boring as hell, so I?m looking forward to getting it out of my hands. Why?? Jaina answered.
They were walking up the stairs of the Keep. The man looked tired, and had worry lines between his eyes. His gaze was dark when he glanced at the young, dark haired girl.
?My child.. I do not want you to worry needlessly, but I would be relieved if you stayed in tonight. Finish the book and go early to bed, and don?t go running around with Imoen.?
?What, why? Dad, is everything alright?? Jaina gently grabbed the man?s arm when they reached the next floor. ?You?ve been really quiet and distant lately, like something was really worrying you. What is it??
The man looked at his child, shaking his head and taking her hand into his. ?I told you not to worry. Now go. Goodnight.?
The old man patted the girl?s hand, then let go, turned and walked away to his own chamber. Jaina looked after him with a thoughtful pout, but soon she, too, turned and continued upstairs to her own small chamber. The room was quite simplistic with one bed, one big closet, and a desk with a wooden chair. Then again Jaina had lived in that very same room for all her twenty years, so it definitely looked like a young woman?s room. The curtains were violet with a flower pattern, and the blanket on the bed had the same pattern. There were several stuffed animals on the bed, and she had named all of them. The closet was filled with clothes (though most of them were old, too small and/or ugly, she thought vainly), and there was jewellery on the corner of the table. Otherwise the table was covered with books and papers that she used for studying.
Jaina sat on her bed and glanced at the heavy book lying on her pillow. History of Amn, the cover said with fancy decorated letters. Jaina sighed, grabbed the book and started reading from where she had left.
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Gorion sat on the chair in front of his desk. He glanced over his shoulder to make sure the girl had not followed him ? she could walk surprisingly silently, and she loved spooking and startling people in the usually quiet library ? and pulled a letter out of his grey robes. He opened it carefully, and sweeping his long, light grey hair away from his eyes, he read the letter with worried eyes.
He sat quietly for a moment, deep in his thoughts. Jaina was an intelligent young woman, but she was mischievous and headstrong. If she wanted to go out tonight, she would. This only meant that he would have to make arrangements. If Jaina would not go early to bed tonight, neither would he. The letter that now lay on the desk in front of the old mage only confirmed what he had already guessed. Candlekeep would very soon be ? if it already wasn?t ? infiltrated by assassins.
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Two hours later Jaina turned to the very last page of the dull book, but didn?t have the patience to actually finish it. The girl sat up on the bed, brushed her long, dark hair with her fingers and yawned. She glanced through the small window of her room ? the sky was turning orange and pink. Sun would soon set down to the sea. Like almost every night she would meet Imoen on the western walls to watch the sunset, but now Jaina felt unsure. Gorion had known about their after dark meetings for a couple of years already, but this was the first time he had actually told her not to go. Why now? Why not four years ago when she and Imoen were caught for the first time? Why not when there were dashing young mage students visiting Candlekeep?s library? Tonight was a very normal, quiet night of the sleepy little Candlekeep. There was nobody special visiting, no handsome young mages, no famous heroes, not even merchants. But Gorion had told her not to go specifically tonight.
Jaina stood up and leaned to her desk, looking out the window. The sky and the sea were almost seamless - both were of delicious pink and orange colors. Dark violet and blue were drawing closer from the east and the sun almost touched the horizon line. Imoen was probably already waiting for her by the wall.
Jaina quickly nodded to herself, sat down, and took her small mirror from the desk drawer. It was a funny thing, being a young woman. Even though this was a very small village built around a huge library, and even though there was really no one interesting around, she still always had to have her hair and bangs on check and lips balmed. Her father got never tired of blaming both her and Imoen of being superficial and silly, but somehow the girls felt that acting like they were somewhere else than Candlekeep would actually take them somewhere else.
Jaina stood up and looked at herself. She was wearing black knee-length pants, simple brown shoes and a violet top. She grabbed a brown cardigan from her closet and pulling it on she sneakily peeked out of her room. One old priest was just coming up the stairs. Jaina pulled back to her chamber, and waited patiently for the priest to go to his room. Then she tip-toed to the stairs, listening hard if someone was coming, and sneaked down. With 20 years of experience she knew that the third step from up and the fifth from down were creaky, so she automatically stepped over them. She held her breath, moving as quietly as possibly past Gorion?s room, and continued all the way down.
When Jaina had gone, Gorion stepped out of his room, looking grimly after his headstrong foster daughter.
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?Where were you?!? Imoen hissed and helped Jaina up on the wall. ?You almost missed it!? she said and nodded towards the horizon. The girls leaned on the wall and enjoyed the last moments of the sun.
?Sorry, but Gorion was? weird. He told me not to come,? Jaina explained.
?Why not?? Imoen asked surprised, but Jaina just shrugged.
?You know? he?s been really odd lately. Remember how he didn?t even blink when Tethtoril blamed me of pinching his empty potion bottles the other day??
?Yeah! And he just smiled when you admitted you had done it! Honestly, it was one of the scariest moments of my life. Maybe he?s losing it?? Imoen suggested, but Jaina poked her with her elbow.
?Ouch!? Imoen yelped and poked right back. ?Well whatever is going on with Gorion, it was still good that we got those bottles.?
Jaina stared at Imoen just when the sun vanished behind the horizon, leaving the sky and the sea pink and violet. ?Good? You call that hangover good??
?The night was fun, wasn?t it? if a little short on my part. Blame Jondalar, he brewed the damn.. what ever it was!? Imoen said defensively, but laughed with Jaina.
?Yeah, what ever it was, it was *way* too strong for anyone! Especially for you,? Jaina snickered and sat down on the wall.
Imoen sat beside her, looking hurt. ?Well you still had the worst hangover! Just what you deserved, I says.?
?No one deserves a hangover like that,? Jaina muttered bitterly. ?So, what are we going to do tonight??
?Don?t know!? Imoen answered and headed towards the ladder. ?I did save us some pumpkin pie from the tavern, though!?
The girls climbed down the ladder and headed towards the tavern, following the wall. Night had fallen over Candlekeep, and lights shimmered in some of the windows. It took some time for the girls? eyes to get used to the darkness by the wall, behind the houses, but they both knew every inch of Candlekeep by heart, so they could have walked all around it blindfolded. Cool grass tickled Jaina?s bare ankles as she followed her red-headed friend, sliding her hand on the smooth stone wall to her left.
A black crow glided in the air above them, and landed on the tavern roof, just above the backdoor and watched the girls approach.
?Hiya, Earl,? Imoen said to the crow before she entered the tavern. ?You?re always around, eh!?
?Would you like some pumpkin pie, too, Earl?? Jaina asked the bird and went in right after Imoen.
The crow that the girls had named Earl a long time ago was not interested in pie. His attention was now drawn to a barely noticeable shadow that had followed the girls all the way from the ladder. The shadow stopped by the corner of the tavern, and slowly took the shape of a slender man, dressed in black and wielding a dagger. The man hesitated, but decided not to follow the girls in. He was about to turn and sneak into a better place to keep an eye on the tavern exits, but could not take more than two silent steps before a strong hand grabbed him by the collar and pushed him on the ground. The man tumbled and rolled skilfully around and faced his opponent.
He was a tall, fearsome man with long light grey hair and long grey robes. He glared at the assassin with dark eyes from under his brow, and spoke with a quiet, yet powerful voice.
?You have this one chance to back out and leave Candlekeep right now, and never go after my foster daughter again,? Gorion warned him.
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?I wonder if he?s ever going to make any other pies than pumpkin,? Jaina mumbled with her mouth full. ?I mean, this is really good, but it gets a little dull when you?ve been eating it for ten years, you know.?
?He used to make apple pie, though ? wow, whatta hell was that?? Imoen jumped up from her chair to the window. There had been a very bright flash of light and some strange sounds. Both of the girls peeked out of the window but saw nothing.
?Maybe it?s just thunder?? Jaina suggested and finished her piece of the pie.
?I don?t think so,? Imoen said, looking uncertain.
?Let?s go and check it out.?
Jaina and Imoen went out the same way they had come in, and sniffed the air.
?Hey look,? Jaina pointed towards the corner of the tavern. The grass was black and burned in an area no bigger than one square metre. The dark haired girl knelt beside it and touched it carefully with her fingers. ?This wasn?t here when we came in.?
?That is so weird. It couldn?t have been a lightning struck, there was no rumble. Just some weird.. thumps,? Imoen muttered.
Earl was still sitting on the roof, looking at the girls curiously.
?Did you see something, Earl?? Jaina asked the crow, standing up. As expected, the crow did not answer.
?Maybe it was just a? pissed off priest walking by, shooting holy lightning bolts from his fingertips,? Imoen said and shrugged.
?Maybe. Well, what ever it was, it?s gone now,? Jaina looked around thoughtfully.
The girls gave up investigating and went back inside. Imoen left a piece of the pie crust on the stairs for Earl, who descended from the roof to gulp it up after they had gone.
Behind the corner, in the shadows, stood Gorion with a black, man-shaped lump at his feet. When the girls had gone back in, the mage sighed sadly and looked at the body of the assassin. He was the first of many, Gorion knew, and could think of nothing else but the letter he had received earlier, and the safety of his dear girls.
Edited by Ilmatar, 29 May 2007 - 11:14 AM.