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[Jarno Mikkola]

This is the place where you can comment on my progressing short stories, entitled "Temple for the heroes of the dead."

The stories are/can be very short, and they are not related to each others, or aren't as for now, the only real thing that connects them is that the worlds have quite simular endings or startpoints, they have a need of heroes, and possible not the very kind that already live in them, but what could you do about them.

Please comment, though I doubt you'll get it the first time you'll read it.

[Celestine]

Interesting. =)

[Shadowhawke]

I second Celestine. And whoah... that's some powerful imagery you've conjured up there. Very cool.

Just as a question, I wasn't sure what you meant by this line: "No, but you'll just got to do it"

Did you mean 'No, but you've just got to do it'? Sorry, I just wasn't sure there >.<;;.

[Jarno Mikkola]

Just as a question, I wasn't sure what you meant by this line: "No, but you'll just got to do it"

Well the question is valid, but as it depends upon few things that are still in the air, the line stays as original, though I might have to change it later.

Now, if somebody could tell me a reason, why nearly always my characters end up dead? But then again, it's a good thing that I don't give them names.

And thanks for the comments!!! Now I need more. If you have constructive criticism, please give all you want, although I might devaluate your opinions later.
As I don't have a proof reader, I am sure there are few spelling errorrs, but I try my best to avoid them.

Edited by Jarno Mikkola, 21 May 2007 - 11:17 AM.