Here is a fan fiction of mine.
I believe it is to be labelled PG - 13, some violence (not that bad I think?)
So. This is another try for me. I would appreciate any comment.
Chapter I. Lich hunting
?Here is the battle plan.?, sir Anomen Delryn said as he unrolled a large map, drawn on thin parchment on the table in front of his officers and the freelancer spellcaster.
Six heads bent over the table. To Anomen?s right was Nogam Stomus, a undead hunter paladin, his lieutenant for this mission. The next one was Guervin Karrat, one of the few old friends of Anomen; they had been together on many goblin-killing campains in their squire years. Opposite of Anomen was Proteor Marmorat, a cavalier, one of the truly flamboyant members of the Order; he was young, full of life and eager, blond haired, blue-eyed, square-jawed, brave, romantic and extremely conspicuous in everything he did. Next to him stood the freelancer spellcaster, lady Cordis, quick black eyes surveying the map with haste, skill and experience. She was an elf, but a strange one, to everyone?s eyes; she had black, curly hair, black eyes, a pale skin and her ears were pierced in many places to support tiny pearls of silvery black stone. Her hair was drawn back in fine rows held by hairpins, but behind her ears it was a free jungle of luxurious, smooth black curls. And she was dressed in red, the same red as her lips. She was quite conspicuous too. The last one around the table was Matteo Delryn, fighter-cleric, son of Anomen Delryn. Father and son were not often assigned on common missions, because of the obvious conflict of interests, but so far the behavior of both had been nothing short of exemplary, given the situation.
The map they were examining was depicting a tower, clearly. There were three separate levels, the two lower ones showing sub-levels separated by flights of stairs. There were two doors to the first floor and none to those above. Lady Cordis calculated that it would be quite a feat worthy of the songs of bards if they managed to get half of their twenty-five men in the tower before the lich sealed it with magic. There were two stairways to each of the next floors, on opposite sides of the room. The third level of the tower was obviously a lab of some sort, with all those stone-reinforced walls and niches in the wall to put warding devices and flat spaces where to inscribes wards and words of power. The second level appeared to be more like a living area; Cordis? stomach churned at the thought of what a lich would be doing in its free times. There was something it would lie upon to restore itself ? it was not a closed coffin as vampires, but it did approach the idea. There was also a table, a small drawer and a magically-cooling device, probably to keep food and souls cold. She repressed a shudder. The first level of the tower was probably crowded with traps and summoned creatures and the lich?s pets and minions. It had a large open area in its center, with the three sub-levels and the flight of stairs giving it a great spatial complexity. Mass spells would be hard to manage in such a complicated environment, and there was a possibility of non-detection zones for invisible or sanctuaried creatures.
?We are going to split in two. Nogam, Guervin and Matteo?s divisions will come in through that door.? Anomen pointed the north entrance on the map. Just in front of it was the first sub-level. ?My division, Proteor?s and lady Cordis will come through this door, in front of and above the other three divisions.? He pointed again. ?Be sure to have a priest detect traps at all times; I leave you to determine in which division he will be, but I suggest he stays close to the front. There will also be an inquisitor or a priest with True seeing at all times. This is of prime importance. Once all the men are in, we will clean each sub-level before moving at the same time to the third sublevel, then together to the second level, then to the third. We expect the lich to be in its laboratory on the third level of the tower, so it is paramount that we reach the third floor with enough men in fighting order to hold off our bad position in the stairs. Are there any questions??
?Any defensive spells that we should be casting before we go in there as a preventive measure??, Matteo asked.
?Remove fear and Protection from evil are always recommended. There is a chance that there will be Umber hulks amongst its pets, so I believe you have already been ordered to memorize a few Chaotic commands?? Matteo nodded. ?There are also the Protections from fire, because the liches have a tendency to Time stop then Gate then Meteor swarm. But the Protections from fire must be cast only once we have cleaned the second floor.?
?Sir, if I may??, Cordis asked, her sweet voice deep with respect.
?Yes, milady??, Anomen said as he turned to her. ?We are grateful for your presence here and would appreciate your insight. I heard that you have fought many of these undead before??
?Oh, not that many.? Six, precisely, eight if she counted demi-liches. Those were a lot harder to come by. ?What I want to say is that it won?t probably cast a Meteor swarm because the space is too small. Unless it can shield itself from fire, it will not risk burning itself to ultimate death because it cannot get out of the area effect of its own spell. And I believe that, with hand-to-hand fighters swarming him and me breaching its magic defenses, it will be busy enough with his battle protections not to have time to protect itself from fire.?
?Thank you for this insight, lady Cordis.?, Anomen nodded towards her, then looked upon the map once more. Then he rolled it neatly and stacked it into a parchment case, before giving the marching orders.
The twenty-five men separated neatly into five groups. There were five men into each officer?s direct command, and Cordis was not to give or receive orders from anyone, casting the spells to the best of her judgement. They moved close to the tower, obviously conspicuous in their shining armors on such a barren land. The lich?s tower rose hiddeously above the ground, a construct of black, brown and grey stone with red mortar, that looked like a construct built with the most evil magics. It reeked of undeath tens of meters away. Life itself seemed to shrink from it; there was no grass or trees anywhere near it, and no birds could be heard, no matter how Cordis strained her elven ears. The ugly tower cut sharply against the soft blue of the sky and the sun above it. It was so horrid that it didn?t seem out of place; the surroundings were so twisted from nature that it was an assault on her elven senses, and somehow it was the sun that seemed out of place. This tower should have been built in the Underdark, not under Amaunator?s blessed sun.
They reached the tower in silence. There were no signs of alarm yet. The priests started to cast defensive spells, then their True seeing and their trap-detecting spells, and then they went really close to the doors. Anomen and Nogam were to be the first ones to step foot into the tower. Cordis managed to find herself a little place close enough to the head to be sure to be able to cast her spells quickly enough when they would step in and not stay stuck behind everyone.
On Anomen?s order, both doors were pushed open brutally with booted feet. The warrior-priest rushed inside with a war cry and his men and the spellcaster followed him quickly. Cordis could hear the scratching of giant spiders ahead of her in the umpenetrable darkness.
?Don?t advance the front line!?, Cordis yelled and stopped dead into the doorway, hands already up to cast a spell. Anomen confirmed her order and barely had the time to keep Proteor from making another step when the Fireball exploded in front of them, the last waves of magical fire stopping right before them. Then she got out of the doorway to let the rest of the men pour in the tower.
There were three spiders, barely able to walk because of their chitinous cuticule partially melted down by Cordis? fireball. She listened to the sounds on the above and below floors. She heard some grunting and feet-shuffling under her; probably zombies, but there was also the hissing of shadows. She hoped there were no wraiths, because those Matteo could not kill with the power of Helm. Not yet. She suddenly heard the distinct, faint ringing in her ears that always came when a nearby priest was calling upon the power of his god to turn the undead. Anomen was standing in the middle of room, shadows piling over each other in their hurry to come down from the level above them. A wave of power extended outwards from Anomen, and the closest shadows and wraiths ceased to exist. The other fighters were still battling the spiders. Deciding that nothing more urgent necessitated her assistance, Cordis shot a few magic missiles to the spiders, which were easily dispatched.
The other half of the men soon made their way up to their sub-level. There were no casualties, but many of the men had been drained of their strength or life by the shadows, or blinded, and would need restoration spells or time to rest to recuperate. Everyone waited until men regained their strength or sight. Those that had been drained of life were put on the last lines to serve as rear-guard and keep low the risk that they would get killed because they were stuck in the middle of a fight.
They were ready to resume their course in about fifteen minutes. The shadows of the third level eliminated earlier by Anomen?s call upon Helm, there were just a few orcs to dispatch. They did not survive well the Fireball.
?Keep a few spells for the lich itself, milady.?, one of the Inquisitors said, amiably. She cringed inwardly away from him, but forced a confident smile on her lips.
?Do not worry, milord. The lich is immune to weak spells such as Fireball. I am keeping my best spells for it.?
The inquisitor nodded and they resumed their deployment on the now clear second level. There was a pause before everyone was in the right place in the ranks.
?It is time we renew our defensive spells.?, Anomen ordered. ?Also make sure that everyone is under Chant and Bless, and Aid those with the drain by the wraiths.?
Just at the end of the defensive spells, Cordis cast a Haste spell, which missed just a few of the men. Then she Stoneskinned and Spell shielded and Spell trapped, and everyone looked at her casting her own defensive spells. She finished with a True sight and requested to come in just after Anomen, because there would surely be something to dispel right from the beginning.
?As much elemental damage as possible,? Anomen said, ?if he begins a spell. We can do nothing while in Time stop.?
The group of knights and squires from the Order of the Most Radiant Heart crisply replied a ?yes sir? and then Anomen and Nogam each bashed in a door. Cordis rushed behind Anomen and hastily leaned against the wall as the rest of the fighters were passing her by, running to the undead creature, yelling battle cries and clanking in their shining armor.
Hopefully, the lich was alone. It hissed and turned towards them, moving from side to side with his race?s characteristic looping of every part of the body, as if undeath somehow decayed the bone and the limbs were not solid anymore. This way of walking always chilled Cordis deep down to the bone.
?You should not have come to this place.?, the lich said with its hissing and cold voice. ?A few of your souls will serve me well enough; I smell the stink of righteousness upon you.?
And then its Spell trigger went off, Stoneskinning it, Improved mantling it and Spell trapping it. Cordis swore as her True sight was wasted; the lich kept its illusions for later, but if it was too late, her spell would be over and she would have to cast another. Or ask the inquisitors, that would do fine too. She began to cast a Spellstrike. She was done quickly and the lich hissed once more. But it did not interrupt its spellcasting, however, and suddenly a Symbol of Fear exploded right in the middle of the Order?s men. There was an uneasy shift for a second as they fought over the magical fear, and then they rushed to the attack once more.
The hasted men were quickly upon the lich; there was not enough place for twenty-five men to fight hand-to hand with the lich; Anomen?s and Nogam?s divisions were battling in close combat with the lich, but the others stood, holding the defense and using bows, crossbows and slings. The officers yelled the orders of fire at will and joined the frey. The hand-to-hand fighters efficiently circled the lich, their strikes bouncing helplessly against the many Stoneskins of the lich.
?Keep hitting it!?, Cordis heard Anomen bellow over the sounds of battle. ?The Breach is almost done!?
Cordis? Breach incantation ended just after the fear spell. This time weapons cut through the lich?s undead flesh and another series of spells came up, triggered by contingency. Cordis began another Spellstrike. The lich protected itself from evil in the meanwhile.
?It?s going to summon a Pit fiend!?, Cordis yelled just as the Spellstrike left her hands. The lich?s magical protections exploded in a white ball of power around the undead, but it still had its Stoneskin and Protection from magical weapons.
?Proteor! Hold off the demon!?, Anomen yelled, before he started a Protection from evil.
The lich?s spell was over before Matteo, Anomen and another priest were done with their Protection from evil on a 10 feet radius.
?With me! At the demon!?, Proteor shouted and his division of cavaliers rallied around him with a great cry of fury and went to battle the demon, to hold it off until the others were done with the lich. The Protections from evil came into effect. Cordis? second Breach hit the lich.
Blades and maces and hammers started to ram into the undead. Its hissing was resonating through the closed space of the tower. There was the crashing sound of metal as the cavaliers started to fight the demon hand-to-hand. There were grunts of injured men. The lich started a Sunfire. Cordis continued to gather her thoughts.
The sunfire exploded in a blinding and burning flash of white light and pain. Some of the men fell around the lich, but Anomen and the other priests rushed to heal them before they left for what lay beyond. The ranks closed swiftly around the lich as paladins and knights struggled to their feet, trying to interrupt the next lich?s spell. Its protections were spent; it was trying a Wail of the Banshee, but it was too long; the injuries would stop it before it happened.
Cordis? mastery of magic returned suddenly to her. With a furious power word, she flew her Spelltrigger at the demon; there were three Lower resistances in it. She again had to stop to breath and think, unable to cast a spell for a while. She looked helplessly as the demon hissed and snapped his jaws, wreaking havoc among the squires of Proteor?s division; the full knights were obviously having less trouble to hold their ground without being torn to pieces. Screams could be heard, for the first time in all the battle; there were battle cries and a few grunts before, but there were full screams now and soon Matteo?s division joined Proteor?s to hold back the demon. Anomen and the other officers were quickly overcoming the lich?s last Stoneskins.
Cordis began another spell as soon as she was able. It was long, and she kept an eye on the battle as she summoned the magic in her hands and mind. The green ball of magical energy left her hands and went to explode right between the lich and the demon. A skull of brown dust materialized almost as high as the roof of the room and a cloud of dry brown dust filled the entire room. The lich fell unlifeless and undeathless. The demon screeched and threw his claws in front of him in a desperate move, a novice impaled on its claws, shaken helplessly like a puppet. The squaly skin of the demon was peeling off its flesh, dried to a point where it cracked open and peeled off. A final ram of a Holy Avenger through the demon?s skull killed it.
Edited by DalreïDal, 25 April 2005 - 10:53 AM.